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The book seems promising and I love that characters.. I'm not being critic tho but it kind of needs like some polishing, kind of But other than that its amazing ❤❤
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The premise, synopsis, story needs a little spazam, you know what I mean. I can understand that it's good all in all, I recommend this book, It's fun and easy to read, good luck author, Kudos to you!
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stories was good, just need to polish a little in every aspect. don't give up and keep writing till story end. as long as not stop in midway, then there is a change to be shine.
I am very pleased to see such an amazing novel! It was so good that I didn't know that I have already read a few chapters! The characters were very lifelike and realistic. With emotions to let us see their character. The plot was steadily building up and it was nice! The worldbuilding was vast and detailed. I like how you explain the nooks and crannies in your craft. Overall, It was easy to get lost in your novel as it was very immersive! I will wait for your work to reach a million views and that will be pleasing to the eyes! Kudos and good luck! Peace ✌️