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King Grey had closed his heart off to all but one, standing by his side his old friend, now right hand, was the only person he could trust.
But fate had other plans it would seem.
Around the same time King Grey breathed his last, so did his only friend.
Reborn as Fayden Leywin, twin brother of Arthur Leywin, Markus begins a new life, his second chance, and he'll be damned if he lets anyone he cares about die.
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I didn't enjoy the story. Mainly because it's exactly the same as the original TBATE but with a different narrative and the said 'mc' is still just a side character to Arthur. Everything that happens in the OG manga happens in this fanfic, no changes whatsoever. Just a lazy work of copy and paste with an extra side character that does everything Arthur does. I mean from awakening at the same time, to getting beast wills at the same time, getting trained at the same time, becoming adventurers at the same time. The only difference I see is that the authors OC is even a little weaker than Art in TBATE. Is it in enjoyable read? Maybe, that is if you haven't read the OG manga in a while and could tolerate reading it a second time. I will give props to the author with Good spelling and grammar work in which you rarely see in fanfics. Good luck author 👍
I had high hopes for this and even igonred those negative reviews. But honestly, I was dissapointed. At first it was exiting since the concept was good and all but after a while its starts becoming boring, it feels like a drag reading it more since its basically just a shortened and summarized version of the original story. There was not much originality and was basically just adding a lesser version of arthur in the story. Like, the process in which he aquires his abilities, mana beast, will and stuff is the same as arthur with only a slight difference. And in someway the author just splits the role of the original arthur into two. For example, some lines and scenes acted by arthur in the original novel is now played by the new mc. In simpler terms its like splitting the scenes and lines of the original arthur into two (art and fey) and duplicating the things art has into two with only some difference.
Umm, how do I put this it's an amazing story. The first few chapters were amazing and fun to read though the way they find out they both reincarnated was severely forced but honestly doesn't affect the actual read of the novel but once it got to the beast will part then too being trained I just kinda lost interest at that point as it was the basically the same as the novel but I didn't want to make a judgment early so I checked the chapter titles and learned there was no change when they go to the academy and what happens before......Like you could have made it so that he joins the lances so he will have sufficient background to date the princess and help art with the problem between him and Lucas I think I cant really remember. Overall a good read if you want a slight twist on OG Novel but not my cup of tea
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Honestly, the story didnt meet my expectations. It seems that the story is exactly the same as TBATE and our character seems more like a side character rather than the main character. at chapter 36 where Arthur and Fayden are being tested at the adventurers guild Fayden is tested by a regular examiner but Arthur is tested by Kaspian this is because Arthurs background has connections to kaspian if thats the case then shouldnt Fayden be tested by Kaspianas well considering theyre twins.
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There are very few of TBATE fanfics, and I think people are underestimating its potential. Your writing quality is amazing and the way you are heading with MC and storyline in general is fairly interesting. Good luck on pioneering TBATE on this site/app. I'll try to keep up too!
I just hate it for wasting my time and leaving me with a sour mood. There is no originality and the mc is more of like a beta Arthur, he is someone trying to leach of what is left after Arthur is done in all the situations. He never has the initiative. More like someone trying to say that I knew the answer after someone has already answered. Like letting people know that I can do it too or like saying that I am special too. A true beta indeed.
I loved the story I don't get why so many people hate on it but I'm loving one of my favorites out of my playlist so continue the good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This was amazing I can’ begin to say how much I loved it even though I want to fight you author but good book
This one of the better TBATE Fan-Fics I have read, good plot and didn’t try and force certain relationships, made the story like the original authors but with a dynamic brother duo twist, plus it fits in with their past lives so the got a trust thing going on from two lives. Honestly a top 5 Fan-Fic.
Really good fanfic of the beginning after the end. I like how it follows the original plot but doesn't feel boring. Looking forward to the next volume.
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I must correct myself... It is a decent story and quite enjoyable. The start was meh, but as it went on it turned out quite nice. So, I was a little bit biased of this story. Overall a decent ff and am waiting how it all turns out.
Im giving this 5 stars because I like the original tbate and this is also pretty good, however I have gotten a little peeved on how fayden seems to be an afterthought for everyone.
Great story keep up the good work. Don't drop plz ................................................././././,/./././/././././/../././././././././././
So, here it is the overall story. Author's thought: 1. What?? Art is from modern world? Then my MC will also be from modern world. 2. What?? Art knows Ki?? His world has Ki?? So, be it. My MC will also know Ki. 3. What?? Art is king in his past world? Then so be it. My MC will be king. Wait. Let him be right hand of king. 4. What?? Art unlocks his mana core in age 3?? So be it. My MC will do it a few days early. 5. What?? Art falls down to save his mother? So be it my MC will also fall down. 6. What?? Someone saved Art?? So be it my mc will also be saved by an beast. 7. What?? Art will have beast will? So be it My MC will also have beast will. 8. What? Art will go Elven world.? So be it. My MC will go elven kingdom. 9. What?? Art has dragon egg? So be it My MC will also have beast pet but people will call the story copied so make the beast's birth a little different. This is the story. It's Copy Art. Paste Art. And, we have new character. Lol. Don't read it's not good. It's all original story. Nothing different. If you remove MC then Art is MC of the original with same story.