The Dawn Of Goldhart

i am so excited to read the upcoming chapters! the writer is great at world building, and i’m very pumped to see how these characters are fleshed out. overall, this first chapter showed us a glimpse into how intriguing this story will be

Just from this short read I feel I got a good bit of information. Props to the author I'll definitely be keeping a eye on this one, as it shows potential to become something great.

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batvigilante

Epic🤘can’t wait to see what their powers are. the author is creating a world where a lot of awesome stuff can happen. Wish I had katanas in high school 😏

Pretty good first chapter. Considering they have clans I guess that it might take inspiration from naruto but in a school zone. The story's glimpse from the synopsis gives me the vibe that naruto gave me but in a different setting.

good book but I don't like the fact that its upload schedule is so screwed. for a wait this long the authors better be having problems or saving up chapters. because I feel like this wait is ridiculous and we have almost nothing about the world. honestly, I would be happy with 1 chapter a week at this point. because the wait is awful and the hiatus is way too long for this little. I wouldn't mind if it was 100 chapters, and then a hiatus this long. I wouldn't mind if it was "20 chapters" then a wait this long but eight chapters and I mean 8 and we're waiting for months that's horrible.

my opinion may be biassed, as I'm friends with one of the people working on the story. they can do better. this one is decent at most. not at all close to what they can do, if they really put time into it. I used to be put on the edge of my seat when reading his books. maybe I shouldn't be expecting the same old writing style, since he's not working alone. but I expect there to be more chapters. what happened when you posted 15 chapters a day, because you couldn't stop thinking of ideas. I know people run out of steam, but this is ridiculous. I'm proud of them as a team, but I'm disappointed in one person. as since you're on a team you should be doing better, not worse.