High School DXD: Fist of Destiny

LV 5

Dracmon13

It's impossible to read, it's very confusing, it's a lot of information, out of nowhere he watched one thing, the other one is in the anime world, he doesn't say how he knows the characters and so on. I think you, the author, have no idea what organizing means?

LV 4

mow

This was the most chaotic thing I've read I'll be honest and say i did not go beyond the first chapter because of it, the scenes just change way too fast, he cant even speak japanese so everything is so confusing when you type it out and he doesn't understand a thing. Then there's the dialogue sometimes you can't tell who is talking because of how fast things go and the odd puntuations inbetween words making it seem weird as well like "Theres a guy over. there." Theres quite a few of these making it awkward to read. Overall review 3.8 ⭐️