The Rebirth of Ancient Gods

The book his great and interesting it progress his not being rushed instead taking it slow to develope the character i like this book but need a little more work if they need to design the chrather ro bring out the story

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yohananmikhael

I was checking some novel for material collecting for my reincarnation novel but I found something in this. Rather than being a novel, it feels like a play. Well, it's your style but it doesn't fit in the norm, which I pretty like to inform you. It has a little confusing plot and back story. I have no idea of what I am reading. Please if you do take this review into account, could you make it into more narrative form than dialogue or something. I am interested in the title but the structure fails me. Maybe the future reader might feel like that too. Hope this is useful.

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