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A Phoenix powered couple(Jean Grey & Leonardo) is caught in the middle of a giant cosmic war.
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I like the first two chapters but they are really small if you increase the length of the chapter that will be nice.[img=update][img=update]
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The worldbuilding and the character development in this story is interesting. I am looking forward to seeing the main character's powers which is a combination of Wolverine and Deadpool.
The last chapter is good and story seen bit slow but I like. Keep it up.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] I am enjoying the story very much. I am eagerly waiting for new chapters and the detailing is very good[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The writing is very good. The detaining done is very good especially the detailing of the forest. The OC character is also very good touch. Cannot wait for more chapters
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Author kal_wayne
The world-building and the extreme detail is a great thing about this book. The character development is also great. It is great to see the author is using a new character instead of an already established or introduced character.