His Majesty, The King (HIATUS)

LV 14

Atabey

I am a simple man. I see no-harem and I m happy. keep up the great work.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 11

Spelloyal

The idea of the fic is interesting, basically we have a mc who inherited the powers of a god who is a mix of Jin Mori and the Jade Emperor. The problem comes with some pretty big plot errors, like the mc being assigned to team 8 even without scouting skills, and the mc blatantly using his powers while making up bad excuses that should be discovered instantly (like saying that used chakra strings when there is a Byakugan user on the team) Maybe if the author had chosen a smaller fandom I would have continued reading, but with thousands of naruto fanfics out there it's just not worth reading this one when the author besides being a novice lacks knowledge about Naruto.

LV 4

ForThe_Lolzs

The fic is rather good I'll say that much. The pacing is alright (Though I would like to see it slow down a bit) the main character is likable and isn't bland, and he already has a goal so that's nice. the powers of the protagonist are cool too. The only real issues I have is I'd like to see a lot more detail in writing when describing something beyond the protagonist and the supporting cast.

LV 4

godlyarrogantz_305

it's a cool story bro, nice concept and good character building ,do you plan on exploring other planets or something cause that would be cool . there are some really cool martial arts worlds you could do to enhance your story 👍👍👌

LV 13

hostile_fire

keep the updates coming, good job 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 4

Gavyn_Mack

honestly, i love the story, it's good overall, all the author needs to do, is make more chapters for experience, then the story will be even better, I can't wait to see what happens next.

LV 4

Notio

It's a good read if you want to. Writing quality is pretty good and detailed Story development is nice but I'd like to it slow down a bit. Character design was not likeable for me but maybe you would like it if you read or even tolerate it ( though I don't really know how teenagers think nowadays, but if the character story depicts an actual teenager, then I would probably want to burn them) Updating stability is quite good World background is good as it is naruto world.