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Meeting you was Unavoidable(BL)
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[Warning: Mature contents]
EXCERPT: The room was dimly lit by a softly glowing candle. An intoxicating smell of incense filled the room making the two people who were entangled with each other drunk on it’s smell.
“Do you trust me?” Jin Woo asked in his husky voice, that had a hint of lust enveloped by his wanting to possess the sweet and frightened cutie under him.
“I…..” Roo Nim gasped, the pain and hunger in his body growing with each passing second that felt like an eternity to him. With his teary wet eyes, he looked at the man who was bullying him.
“Hey…Roo Nim-ahh…please answer me hmmm?” There was urgency in his deep voice and a longing in his dark black eyes.
He landed a soft kiss on his neck slowly circling his tongue on only one spot making the boy beneath him produce muffled whimpers as he tried to block his mouth to stop himself from producing weird noises.
“I love you….sighhh..I just love you to death…please give me a chance okay?” Breathing heavily on his neck Jin Woo confessed the feelings he had been bottling up for a long time his heart thumping loudly matching the heart beat of the seductive Fox beneath him.
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#Slow burn story with a lot of action and drama
#Two couples to make the story even more interesting
#Magical tale consisting of magical beings…..
#If you love this work please help me by giving comments and reviews
#Although I did not make the WPC I am glad I still wrote this so if you think its sill worthy of being read I am happy to welcome you..
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I am going to give full 5 stars for the sake of hardwork she had put into this.. THe story is about magic and phantasy but even more about love between boys which is probably the bestest thing in the world... That aside, I love how beautiful the cover is and the interesting story line.
So when i read synopsis the story felt normal..the prologue was not what i expected then the chs following were even better like it is a good read till now.
Hello! First of all, I want to appreciate the author for writing a book with a fresh idea like this 😍 Then, I will start my review... The cover is cute, but the font is not suitable for the title, I think. Make the title look bigger and if it is possible, make the characters look bigger as well 🤔 Then, the synopsis. I suggest the author make an edit with the synopsis. I think it will be better to let the readers know what's in the story rather than just write down some cuts of the dialogues. For example, introduce the characters a little, then write a little about the storyline. If the author can show an interesting idea in the synopsis, I think it can attract more readers. In terms of writing, I found some misspell issues. Not fatal, but I believe that the author can do better after proofreading it again 😁 Other than that, I found some ambiguous sentences because of the lack of punctuation marks and also the punctuation marks misplaced. But, I enjoyed this story, overall. The author is so good at describing the situation. It feels so realistic and not too much. The idea of this story is also intriguing. It's worth praising. Thank you for your hard work, author-nim [img=recommend]