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Ophelia Heide couldn't wait to become a new advisor for the Moon Castle and take her father's place! Well...
That was until she was saved by Leo, a fairy who protected the Galaxy Kingdom. To pay off her debt to him, she was stuck with the task of reuniting the two sides after the capricious kings had a war over... something. Not knowing where to start, she accidentally found her heart captured by the couple's daughter, Princess Koharu, but neither girl ever thought they would flirt with the boundaries of time and history to fight for their love.
Unfortunately, things weren't easy for Leo either as he worked to save the couple, unlocking the secrets of the kingdoms' administrations in the process. What he didn't expect was to find himself falling for an elusive messenger named Sinclair throughout it all, but would his heart allow them to come in?
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So I got a few things to say and I'd be straightforward on it. The synopsis gives a detailed description of what to expect, and a beautiful way of introducing intergalactic beings and objects. It got me wanting to actually venture into this world of yours. First off, the beginning, the description of the feeling, the perspectives made me feel like I actually was the one experiencing such. As a lover of flowers, I could say you made me want those galaxy looking and beautiful flowers. Then for a brief second for the first time while reading, I felt scared of a flower when it moved, but it turned out it was the galaxy fairy who is both cute and kind. Although I didn't enjoy how the fairy(Leo) was treated by Ophelia at first but I see a budding friendship, if not more 😌. Second, it's quite new to me, see a WLW and a BLB in one novel and these are all balanced out well. I do hope this hidden gem gets the recognition it deserves.
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I was instantly hooked from the synopsis. The characters are so rich and the world alongside it. A really interesting concept from the get go. Incredible job author!
The plot is unique! It is a rare combo of fantasy and LGBT+. The background was well described making us imagine everything perfectly. Few conservations were funny too and overall the novel was well articulated. Personally, I feel that the cover that can be made more interesting. Keep Going!!!
Took really long to post this review😅 First of all kudos to the author to create some really distinctive and exciting characters for the story. Really loved the characters Leo and Koharu instantly, especially Leo (due to some coincidental similarities of *someone* in my own story😂). As per the grammar side, it actually helped me to discover new words. Loved the poetic dialogues and the small funny dialogues, especially the recurring *internal dialogues* that goes on within the Mc's mind, describing how she feels. Interesting creative choice. The main positive/strength would be the dialogues. Non cheesy, hilarious, organic and self-aware; Loved them. I almost have no complaints except the slow pace, which is still organic and understandable for the story. The setting is impressive and the romance... I don't know what to say because that's something I never experienced in real life and still remains as a pointless fantasy in my life🙂... I LOVED IT. It's completely cliche-free and also refreshing to read and laugh. I am only halfway through the story and I expect great things to happen in and to the novel. Congrats!
The best fantasy novel I ever read here, The characters, their description and the world design are all perfect 👍 The story goes by flow so it's easy to understand and read. And the little but bickering between fifi and Leo is just what I loved the most in this novel,plus Leo would be my favorite character here. And last but not the least Great work, keep it up!! I am putting this in my collection [img=coins][img=update]
[Preliminary Review] Honestly a really cute (and kinda quirky/funny) story! I really enjoyed how fleshed out the world building was, and there's a really nice balance of description and plot. Not gonna lie, I really liked the little tidbits of sassy thoughts (probably the most out of anything?), but I totally feel you about WN not letting you italicize ;-; I haven't gotten super far yet (chapter 10), but I'm looking forward to seeing how the story develops!
I enjoyed reading this story. The first paragraph definitely hooks the reader in, and the rest add a layer of mystery. It keeps you intrigued. This story has serious potential to going premium and I'm shocked not many people read this yet give it a shot since it's free it'll give the author a reason to keep writing this hidden gem. The story development is superb with an interesting plot, steady update and well detail character description. I love your work, thou I don't read this genre but this got me hooked. Great job Author keep going <3 [img=recommend] FIVE STARS <3
Your first chapter is enough to capture my interest. Each chapter is so well written, I really like Ophelia(my fav sharp tongue woman) and poor Leo. Everything is perfect, plot, writing, and character design. I'll really recommend everyone to read this book. From me it's 5/5. keep it up.
This novel so far is such a fun read. The author has such a wonderful way with words and an equally wonderful sense of humor. Ophelia's mind is such a funny place 😂 This is the first LGBTQ+ book I've ever read and I'm no where near disappointed. Thank you author for giving me such an amazing first experience 🤗
The plot is intriguing, your characters are expressive, nicely-created background world, and well-written descriptions. You don't struggle with grammar, style, or tenses so it's a pleasure to read it. Well done!
Honestly, this is one of those few hidden gems on WN. I have no idea why it isn't as popular as it should be, but this definitely deserves more attention. No grammatical mistakes, good update stability, awesome characters(love Leo btw), intriguing plot that doesn't drag stuff on like a lot of novels, and extensive fantasy background. Give this a shot!
I'm in the middle of reading it, and I know for sure that this book here is a hidden gem!! I can literally imagine all the scenarios the author has explained. As for G-errors, I don't think I found any, Or maybe it was too minor for me to notice, lol. All the characters are uniquely designed here, Specially Leo! He is like that perfect partners in crime. Everytime I find myself eagerly waiting for his scenes :) And I love the sweet friendship between Fifi and lele. As for our female lead, She is so smart with a nice sense of humour. I totally recommend this book to everyone, Guys just go ahead and have a look, you won't regret. My best wishes to the author 👍🏻💞
VOTED! not a lot of fantasy novels that i see with LGBTQ tag, glad this one's here, the word structure,the form, the plot and everything surrounding this book including the witty descriptions are exceptional.
The novel concept is engaging, the plot are fairly well planned, I actually like it, synopsis is already interesting so that is a plus and yes tho I'm not used to first person writing I also think you've done a great job writing the book. Yet the only problem I notice especially at the first chapter is that the paragraph seems longer than usual, it kinda makes me a bit separated from the story as I read. World description are ok so as the characters. However so far so good that is why I'm wishing you the very best for your journey as an author. Fighting! 😊
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In the top percentage of writing quality on this site. Great characters, great atmosphere, great descriptions. The princess love interest doesn't appear until the very end of chapter eight, so please stick around until then if you're here for the romance.
I'm doing the same thing with this review (screenshotting and reposting) since I haven't gotten to recover it, and it wasn't already factored into the rating. From Comfort_Wilson:
I'm just going to do what I've seen a couple of other authors do about the missing reviews and just post them myself with screenshots since I haven't been able to fix it after so long. From TheiaPsyche:
This story is really nice. Characters are much interesting and it makes one read more and more. The background world is great. I was eagerly finding a novel like this and finally I did it. Good job Author👍👍