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This is the story of Zarco, a young guy with a magic stone and not much else, and Caelum, a wingless "angel".
"Caelum
-That's stupid...
Zarco
-Eh, it is..."
Ahem, anyway, a lot of action & adventure awaits them, as they are forced together on a journey in search of some magic stones of legendary power.
"Zarco
-Liar! We're currently doing a lot more of "trying to survive" than rock picking around here!
Caelum
-Yeah, that is pretty misleading."
Ok, screw this, I am out, if nobody read this story it will be your fault.
"Zarco
-The hell are you talking about, you're the one who wrote this...
Caelum
-Since our writer is unreliable, I will finish this. This story at its core is just a fun rump, focused on action, adventure, and a lot of comedic dialogue and exchanges. If you had at least a chuckle reading this then you will probably enjoy the story.
Zarco
-Yo, thanks for reading till this point, we will meet again at the pages."
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Review from Honest Reviews: So, I know I told you it would take awhile but I didn't imagine it would take this long. The first thing I would like to address is the writing style. This is half written like a play making it difficult to hold your attention especially for newer readers. The story is great! Great Characters! What stops this from being average and a great story is the writing style. A rewrite is definitely in the books for you if you continue with the story. There is tons of great vids out there to help you write. Stick it out and consider updating more frequently. That is the only way you are going to get more views. Thanks for waiting for the review!
This is the third or fourth review I have ever made, and I'm making it because I see immense potential in this story. If you can get past the fact it is written like a play, you're in for a treat. The pacing is incredible, and the worldbuilding so far (Chapter 17) is just as good. There is just enough detail for you to understand the setting and characters without getting lost in the specifics. All in all, very good, and I recommend.
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Read this guys! It's totally different to other novels. Why there are many better novels but underrated? I'm still in chapter 6, but I'm hooked up with the story. If you enjoy reading it, you have the urge to read the next chapters. So thumbs up for this!