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The Desperate Rights

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Author: GorgeousSteel

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Despite having a distorted view of life,Lilian Lazaros still expecting that she can get the rights after her husband William filed a divorce with her.She hopefully wants her children beside her,even she will fight against what's right. Demetri Sylvestre,the man who allegedly ruined her marriage helps her out to claim her desperate rights against William for which he needs some selfish benefits in return.

Having amidst the two rich selfish and lunatic CEO,another man appeared obsessively to fulfill his promise towards her,which makes her life more complicated and twisted.

She's under the playful games of the three possessive fellas.But,their games turn into an irrepressible trap of love.

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She married to a stupid douche.She met the selfish traitor,and she met the third guy who was sick and obsess with her.

William, " I regretted that I let her go, but I will surely regret more if I will choose to lose her forever."

Demetri, " Love? I didn't know what is love but until she came, she taught me how to be a person."

Wyndell, " I will kill myself if she choice to remarry someone over me. She's my life,and she could be my healing."

Lilian," I'm just claiming my desperate rights but those three guys appeared of destroying my drowsy soul."

" I'm confuse of choosing the right one but let the love choose the best."

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Cover is not mine.

This story contains a lot of grammatical errors, sentence lapses and plot holes. Please bear with me.

This is not a kind of heavy drama story.Heavy lines at first but not so light plots on the rest.

This is my first english story and I am not good at writing english.

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    GorgeousSteel

    Hi everyone, let me rate this with 5 stars as an author. Votes, reviews, comments, and gifts are highly appreciated. I would like to inform you that I am not a Native English writer. You can encounter here a lot of grammatical errors, sentence lapses, or even plot holes. I am not good at writing at least I tried. You can correct my grammar, I gladly appreciate it. Thank you ๐Ÿ˜˜

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    Nico_Aniban

    Nice story. I am still reading and already love the flow. It's a little bit confusing but I luv the character of the protagonist.๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ Lilian is such a strong woman. I think this could be more interesting for upcoming updates. This story makes me excited coz the synopsis itself defines the love and attraction between the protagonist and the 3 guys. I love reverse harem. Keep up the good work! By the way, I made this review to boost your confidence in keeping writing and updating this story. I hope you completed this story... makes this story more exciting and I'm giving you my support.

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    AnneUsual

    It's 2 early to rate 5 stars, but I'm an avid fan of new stories w/ an original plot twist. I am excitedly waiting for your updates...considered this review as one of the things that can boost ur confidence to write.

    2yr
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    La_Memeng

    I honestly, Im little bit not into this kind of story, but after all I like the flow.. It's too early to review but hoping it goes full of love. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐโค๏ธ

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    RogueRogie

    I read this before, and I comments a lots but sad to read again, the author revise it๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ but, started reading again and I started to love it. .thanks for the revision. ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

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    Galleta1998

    ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜Nice to read this story. Early giving a review. ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Love the flow of the story. .not really like the other story, the start is thrilling and I hope more love on the rest chap

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    marie_larsona

    yey! I am excited to read the next chap. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜ I gave 5 star especially the updating stability. .I hope this story won't be disappoints me๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

    2yr
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    cartel_thompson

    Early to review, but pls author don't disappoint me. Keep writing for more exciting plot. I keep reading your story, and ur revision. Applauded ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘u change the plot but I like it though. ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ

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    Hallowed456

    First time to review. I read this book earlier but thanks you revise it author. I much better like ur revision. ๐Ÿ‘โค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜ please update more. I am eager to read more about ur story๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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    Mareng

    Loving this story๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘waiting for your updates author. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธ๐Ÿงกโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘โœŠ good job. Keep it up writing. ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

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