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Ray McAllister having a recurring Nightmare where's the world end is near. Armed with that knowledge he will attempt to save his friends and family.
(sorry for the bad grammar etc. its my first time writing and as per usual Fallout is the property of Bethesda Softworks)
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Started out strong then the Author decided that he wanted to write a completely different story halfway through that has nothing to do with the setting or the previous story apparently.
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I've always wanted to read a fallout fanfic and hoping this would be one. sadly it seems more like a prequel. maybe its leading up to the story, which i hoped would be base building and focused on preparing and the safety of him and his loved before the fallout. it may well hit on those subjects but it seems more focused with normal daily life there, and it seems this'll drag on forever honestly. been waiting months to finally get to the story line but that doesn't seem to be in the plans. I think the story was rewritten but seems like years before it'll reach the point I anticipated. Not a bad story if you aren't expecting a full on fallout story for the next year or so.
It’s alright the writing, grammar, and structure of the story is really bad. I was disappointed because the author has such a unique idea but the execution is just not there. The main character makes some weird and dumb choices even though he is suppose to be so smart. The fallout vibe is just really not there either. The worst part is the dialogue it’s very weird and not realistic for people to say.
Pretty good story I like the character choices you made if you have mods with this fallout to be even more interesting what if you had a mod workshop after the bombs fell that be interesting but anyway keep up a good work I love to read more your stories soon.
Pretty disappointing. Story is mostly just badly written high school slice-of-life and some gang stuff. And worst of all author abandoned any realism. He has magic inventory and he can even craft stuff like in the game. Inventory is totally op, and so is crafting system, mc doesn't need to do anything, system does it all -.-
I'll change my review if you plan on keeping the teacher, the gf, a few more girls like the gang boss and give them kids lol don't think poorly of me just gives a uniqueness especially since they've been doing it raw I can only assume she's pregnant already
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Make a discord, maybe ask for help to get it edited; it’ll be even better than it is now.
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A única coisa que posso dizer é, a história é boa e peço o autor que não desista, pequenos erros são inevitáveis e a toxidade do ser humano também, se fosse fácil ser bom em algo isso não seria considerado um mérito, continue na luta irmão!
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Good stuff so far, I like the character and his decisions .I feel like you should speed up his plans a bit though or speed up the story a little.