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Eridel Domicus was the trash of the Domicus family, an extremely powerful family that had dominion over a large part of the world, having riches upon riches and ways upon ways. However, it was their greatest pride turned biggest shame to have a young master that... no. Let it not be said.
But one night, the 22 year old Eridel had incomprehensibly... died.
But even more unfathomable was the fact that against all logic he began to see again. And what Eridel saw... terrified him.
Or at least that was supposed to be how he reacted right? Why is it that...
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The first light novel of [ The Monarch ].
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Is it shameful to give your own book 5 stars? What a joke! If I can't like my own book, who else will? Besides that... I'm seeing all the "Don't drop the book" comments, can you guys also see the pressure that writing a story like this has? ;3 I'd just like to say that I don't plan on doing so at all. I quite like how things are going and I'd like to make this one of the best light novels out there. But thanks for the support guys, I really appreciate it and the fact that I'm getting so much love despite this being my first book is really welcoming. So I thank you.
Interesting , it's a cool concept that has a lot of potential, 5 stars for the new author, the way Primordial essence was introduced was kinda random but that's fine, not much I can say after 2 chapters
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Above-average idea, below-average writing. Lots of potential, but the writer clearly needs a ton more practice before being able to pull of what he wants; as it is, the style is inconsistent, sentences are often repetitive, and the descriptions, details, world-building and so forth are done in an odd, jarring manner. The only reason the WQ gets 2 stars is because I've seen far worse on this site. Great idea, though.
So far this novel is pretty promising. I've read several world building novels like this and the hardest thing for most people is pacing themselves. More often than not they will try to speed things up to get to the "good parts", so I can't help but feel reshreshed to see the author taking their time here... I look forward to seeing how you grow your world.
The idea was good. The execution was terrible. The MC is nothing but a child. The plot is predictable and downright cliche. There isn't really anything that makes me want to read more
Love it! I love when protagonists are the world itself! Creating their own species and watching their stories and progression through an all-seeing eye. Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see where the story will go!
Excellent novel ! The grammatical errors are minimal and its been a while for me to see a novel with god protagonist or something plus The concept is impressive the Mc really push his limits of imagination not some other MCs that think inside the box Its a new novel, hope author doesn't drop this
I'll be honest, I like the concept and how the characters are carried, but I don't know if I would recommend it, the armor of the plot is too much at the beginning so do not expect any kind of explanation, literally everything happens just because. An argument that is often repeated a lot in this novel is: Something incredible that probably no one would have thought of. It is not that I complain, but if you stop using it in excess, it would help a lot of dear author. Anyway, if you want to read something new if I recommend this work but do not expect something from the other world.
‐------------------------------------------------------------------------@@@@@--A very good novel as it has civilization and having a god mc
Great book I can't wait till more chapters come out. The main character is a chilled nonchalant character in a good way, can't wait till he gets a girl
Good so far but, I still am confused on how he will even have a harem he is a planet.
realy like the concept of this book. its something ive never read before, the kingdom building aspect is intresting but what intrests me more it the little almost side storys written from the prespective of one of the animals. its new to me, the way its pieced together.
I've been enjoying this book, the worldbuilding is very good and I like the idea of a planet building itself in a way. This book is the authors first so the beginning of the book has some parts that get a little confusing but its not difficult to understand the gist of a what is going on. The biggest error this book has is the extensive character list and power system. Basically every race has different power systems, unique individuals in that race find new power systems, the mc introduces more power systems and creates unique races that have new power systems. It's too late to fix this issue now and its not actually horrible since I'm used to books that have 1 powe system that they never explain so you just kinda go with the flow and enjoy the ride and its fine. The characters however, I find myself confused on who is who, where they are, and what they are doing. A character list would be nice so we can understand all the nicknames and remember who we are talking about. An even better thing would be a basic map(although im not sure the feasibility) that every few chapters where you switch to see what a different race is up to, you give 1 map of where all the characters in the previous chapters since the last map have moved, then another map of where all the upcoming characters in the next set of chapters are before the chapter begins. Again idk how feasible that is, even if it was just art from the paint tool, but it would be super helpful to understanding the story.
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Pretty good, now I'll give you five stars. I like it, keep it up. Great job! ✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨
What can I say? This novel is just another level, the grammar is good, and there are some mistakes but that's normal, and is more than possible to read it. We have at least one or two chapters every week, and that's fine with me. The story development is very interesting, bruh he is a WORLD, and the author doesn't hurry the story. Furthermore, the character design and the world background also are very nice, character design can improve, but they have something uncommon, they are ALIVE. And the background is still making but so far is very good.
Pretty good, now I give five stars to any novel I like because there are few and far in between. I will have to admit this novel pretty good but my only problem is the harem. Great job author-San keep up the great work!
please don't drop this this novel is perfect and any recommendations on similar novel (sorry a can't write English ) ......................
Sangat bagus tidak ada pilih kasih dalam ras. Biasanya yang saya liat tentang penciptaan mc selalu bilang dia akan netral tapi banyak yang nelayan ludahnya sendiri
This is very good , is a Novel with a true unlimited potential , and that I want to say is , First : please don’t abandon the novel , if you write it good you can obtain a first class novel or even a top novel in this page. Second: if he Is the world I was thinking about he can be something similar to the Heavenly Dao of the novels, that ones who have conscience, like the one of “Journey of the fate destroying emperor” , this is just an idea Third: YOU CAN DO IT , PLEASE CONTINUE THIS , this remember me to some novels that have a lot of potential and it would be a waste to abandon it ( yes I’m traumatized with that because that is VERY common in web novel, please don’t do that i need to go with the therapist another time)