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The Time master of Marvel
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Noah dies and goes to another world full of danger with heroes and villains at every corner. So please join Noah on this ride full of adventure and action. See ya on the ride .
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it's not a story, it's more of a summary than anything else. it's a great concept but the author doesn't know how to write. .
Hope you all enjoy my work and please give me feedback I'm a new author and I actually read your feedback ai know from y'all feedback I need to work on dialogue and I'm trying. I even looked up how to do dialogue in a story and it was vague. So please enjoy and have a good day
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Feels like I'm reading a checklist instead of a story that should have better literary discription and dialogue. The scenes don't even feel like there was effort put into its writing. Too fast paced and I mean fast. all the chapters could literally just be made into one prologue, if the author combines them and works on the grammatical parts of the story. I'm not trying to be hater, just for clarification, I like the idea you have. It just needs more polishing for better execution.