Fairy Tail: New Dragon Slayer

LV 15

southgamez

The transition is garbage. It feels like I'm reading an illiterate middle schoolers go at writing. Don't get me wrong, it's very creative, and fun to read if you can get into a dumber mindset, but the constant use of "I mean" "You know" and "Something like" makes it look like the author's vocabulary is limited, and detail is not being portrayed. Also the character speech lines are weird, while it's almost impossible to tell who is talking. I'll continue reading, but I'd like to see improvement

LV 13

Uchiha_Ichigo

Pretty good tho the dialogue is kinda hard to follow. Sick dragon slaying idea too, it is a very unique one and sounds cool too. 😎👌👍😎👌👍

LV 4

ODlUM

Idk ill give it 3 stars the guy just talks to himself for like the first 6 chapters ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

LV 3

Snipe_is_here

yes ........................................................................................................................................

LV 7

kobeblackmamba

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LV 13

Varun_Mohunah

I will be honest, the fanfic is great but. Author you should try to rewrite the dialogues because it is frankly very hard to follow like sometimes a person say 1 line and sometimes 2. It becomes hard to understand who is saying what. In my honest opinion, continue to make chapters but don't upload them, it's just to have you keep track of what you're doing. And instead of uploading the chapters, rewrite the dialogues of previous chapters. I think many readers are like me dropping this fanfic because it is difficult to read otherwise grammer is good. Thanks for reading my opinion and rant. Goodbye.

LV 13

CrimsonRoseDevil

I can't tell when the characters are thinking or speaking and this is the second time I found a fairy tail fanfiction where I can't follow the dialogue

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LV 1

Mor1

The story is pretty good although it does get hard to follow from time to time and is a bit slow (though im more fine with it being slow rather than it getting rushed) but it is more original than other fairy tail fanfics out there since the author did go his own route when it comes to building up his character and his powers though I do hope that the mc gets a character development soon and that the author includes more interactions with other characters because rn its just the mc talking to himself most of the time

LV 12

Dayaldas_Nayak

are you from india...........................................................................................................................