(DROPPED) The Paragon Magi

LV 2

Alinix

the story seems to be interesting but lacks a direction. waiting to see where it goes hopefully a direction becomes clear. the concept has alot of potential

LV 4

ssyffix

Interesting premise. The world is something I will have fun exploring. A fine addition to my collection. Shout-outs to The Watcher btw... The author does a good job of juggling their moving plot points and multiple characters. I have a few questions, and I wonder how they will be answered. I hope the author does a good job at answering the stuff they have set up. The writing style was cool so I was glad to have found this novel. This story could go anywhere tbh. I look forward to seeing where this is going. Thanks a bunch author

LV 1

Fake_Danwini

Hey there! This is your 110%, not a bot review! I had read up to chapter five and really enjoyed the idea of the world!. Seems like there is an intergalactic ranking of beings and the idea that one would take pity and save a hyuuuman babe was really fun to imagine. The only thing that made me really disinterested in continuing was the pace at which events were happening. I felt as though it was just lightspeed with how we moved from the mom to the AI and then to the whole debacle. Feels like there was a lot of missed opportunity to tell a story there. You just started to there is plenty of time to go back and mess around with it if you wanted to, which I encourage. I think you have something that'd be really cool if you developed it a bit more. Keep at it!