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This FF has a lot of issues so it being rewritten with a new plot
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At new york airport, A sudden explosion takes place the crowd starts a riot and began a stampede which caused the death of two best friend who held each other's hands till end.
But little to their surprise it wasn't the end for them yet God saw their souls and gave them an offer which they couldn't refuse.
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One of the best iseas, having 2 best friends As narUto and sasuke. But after that, it just goes down hill. their “perks” were too overpowered. aLready at the age Of 7, they are strong enough to defeat Kage legels or at least are near kage levels. On top of that they get wishes. A good story is something that challenges the main characters. But In this sTory, there is no challenges. narUto has everything he could ask. same goes for sasuke. way to fix this is By removing the power ups. make susUke awaken hIs Sharingen because NaRuto Or his family was in danger. make kyubu like in original but with less hate compared to original because naruto would always talk with him. If ur goal is to have a story of 20 chapters, yea this could work. but i dont think thats ur goal because u choose naruto as ur world. For a long term story, Have real life challenges thrown at mcs. so they can be retable. otherwise , it just becOmes super boring after chapter 4, in my case and even then, i skipped some paraGraph because it diDnt make sense. background charavters are super weird too. they feel like nps and mcs feel like npcs with better ai.