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Its not bad but that s only because it is a complete ripoff of "Reborn as a Frey" by HolyJoker. The plot and character design are exactly the same its basically plagiarism.
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it would have been an interesting read if it weren't for the grammar, it was was like I was bleeding from my eyes...........................
ok let's be honest the beginning was bad like there was way to much mistakes but after more chapters we all saw how the author improved. Great job
There were a few errors in the beginning, but over time the grammar improved, as did the narrative itself. Author! Keep up the good work! I hope you don't give up on such wonderful work.
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i mean overall the premise of the story is very interesting but the grammar is just sooo bad its unbearable if it had better grammar this story would actually be a good read
A good read. There are very limited amount of GOT fic with evil MC, and in this fic MC is as bad as Satan. He cares about nobody but himself, he's a lustful, vengeful, ruthless guy that even Roose Bolton is afraid of. So far MC seems level headed, he has a goal unlike some fic that discovers it down the road. Basically the MC wants to be the KING. And he will stop at nothing to achieve that. Also there is no love interest, or I'm unsure if there will be any ever, as I said before he cares about no one. The author has done a great job the fic is very enjoyable and with a lot of mature content, also the grammatical errors are limited, punctuation, vocabulary are also decent. It's a worthwhile fic. Read it if you love evil MC.
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Good novel,recommended to people that like evil mc's %##%#%#%#%#%#%##%#%%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%##%#%#%%#%#%##%#%#%#%#$
You don't use lord fy's pic as a cover of a poorly written hormonal teenager's fanfiction.
Good GOT fan fic. villain like MC with Magic power(Not very OP?). 22 Chapters now with 1 lemon scence.story pace is also good 👍👍👍. I like it .
great story love the character. looking forward to future chapters. .............................................................................
more plz ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................. -,05 star by writing errors, but still a lot of fun
There are so many grammar and spelling errors in this. The character is pretty one-dimensional and is a sociopath rap*st. The world background is okay but issues like names and gender seem to put a toll on the reader’s attention. Meh fanfic.
evil MCs are the best (In my opinion).........................................................................................................................
well if your wondering yes this is like those ff where the mc will do anything to be Immortal so don't expect any morals in his actions WARNING!!! the mc has no morals so actions like r#pe and blackmail are in this other than that it's really good and I don't mine the mc actions as I have seen worse I also don't want anyone rating this low because the mc is a r*pist or a mùrder the author clearly states the mc is gonna do some messed up shet so don't whine when you have been warned also this is not like a holy joker ff holy joker makes his mc smart and evil but he doesn't go too far as not all of his readers like shet like that but this is different author will go across that line
I read all Chapter in a day loved it KEEP UP GOOD WORK {GOOD STUFF} I just hope the updating speed is fast
I've Been Reading HolyJokers Fic Recently And I Like How His Characters Are All Evil Hope This One Is More Evil Than Them. [img=exp][img=exp]
You know, the description is misleading, it says hedonist instead of rapist, that should be fixed. Not my cup of tea, but some people might enjoy reading about these kinds of characters.
Finally, good stuff to read on this site, I am tired of reading friendly harem mc. ............................. .......................
Its not bad but that s only because it is a complete ripoff of "Reborn as a Frey" by HolyJoker. The plot and character design are exactly the same its basically plagiarism.
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Nice... .. ... ...... ... . 😁😍😴😍😊😁😍😴😍😴😴🥦😴😍😴😁😍😴🤔❤️😁😜💩🤔😁🤔😭😊🙄😍🤔🎶😍😉⌚😘⌚😭🤮😴🤔👀🙏🤔🎶😍🙏🤮🎶😘🙏😍👀🎶😍🙏😘👀😍
it would have been an interesting read if it weren't for the grammar, it was was like I was bleeding from my eyes...........................
ok let's be honest the beginning was bad like there was way to much mistakes but after more chapters we all saw how the author improved. Great job
There were a few errors in the beginning, but over time the grammar improved, as did the narrative itself. Author! Keep up the good work! I hope you don't give up on such wonderful work.
Great fanfic ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… ………… …………
Let her take Ashara as her wife that she has a sad fate in the book thank you[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
i mean overall the premise of the story is very interesting but the grammar is just sooo bad its unbearable if it had better grammar this story would actually be a good read
A good read. There are very limited amount of GOT fic with evil MC, and in this fic MC is as bad as Satan. He cares about nobody but himself, he's a lustful, vengeful, ruthless guy that even Roose Bolton is afraid of. So far MC seems level headed, he has a goal unlike some fic that discovers it down the road. Basically the MC wants to be the KING. And he will stop at nothing to achieve that. Also there is no love interest, or I'm unsure if there will be any ever, as I said before he cares about no one. The author has done a great job the fic is very enjoyable and with a lot of mature content, also the grammatical errors are limited, punctuation, vocabulary are also decent. It's a worthwhile fic. Read it if you love evil MC.
Reveal Spoiler Good novel,recommended to people that like evil mc's %##%#%#%#%#%#%##%#%%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%#%##%#%#%%#%#%##%#%#%#%#$
You don't use lord fy's pic as a cover of a poorly written hormonal teenager's fanfiction.
Good GOT fan fic. villain like MC with Magic power(Not very OP?). 22 Chapters now with 1 lemon scence.story pace is also good 👍👍👍. I like it .
great story love the character. looking forward to future chapters. .............................................................................
more plz ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................. -,05 star by writing errors, but still a lot of fun
There are so many grammar and spelling errors in this. The character is pretty one-dimensional and is a sociopath rap*st. The world background is okay but issues like names and gender seem to put a toll on the reader’s attention. Meh fanfic.
evil MCs are the best (In my opinion).........................................................................................................................
well if your wondering yes this is like those ff where the mc will do anything to be Immortal so don't expect any morals in his actions WARNING!!! the mc has no morals so actions like r#pe and blackmail are in this other than that it's really good and I don't mine the mc actions as I have seen worse I also don't want anyone rating this low because the mc is a r*pist or a mùrder the author clearly states the mc is gonna do some messed up shet so don't whine when you have been warned also this is not like a holy joker ff holy joker makes his mc smart and evil but he doesn't go too far as not all of his readers like shet like that but this is different author will go across that line
I read all Chapter in a day loved it KEEP UP GOOD WORK {GOOD STUFF} I just hope the updating speed is fast
I've Been Reading HolyJokers Fic Recently And I Like How His Characters Are All Evil Hope This One Is More Evil Than Them. [img=exp][img=exp]
You know, the description is misleading, it says hedonist instead of rapist, that should be fixed. Not my cup of tea, but some people might enjoy reading about these kinds of characters.
Finally, good stuff to read on this site, I am tired of reading friendly harem mc. ............................. .......................