Webnovel Author: Newnoob - Fanfic Collection

I don't know man I like all the OG characters too much to suggest replacing them. However, I think MC should try supporting characters instead of leading ones. Like Podric Payne, Lancel Lannister, Dario Naharis etc. These are some characters that left compelling impressions during the series. So please do think carefully about it.

Yo post 10 chapters right this instant. This is a master piece and will likely become one of the greatest ASOIAF fic in webnovel.

Author if MC married Visenya Targaryen then there will be no Maegor 'The Cruel'. As Maegor is Aegon and Visenya's son. Do you have any alternative for that?

Yo can you make MC conquer Stepstones and be it's new lord paramount. Would make things more interesting by the times 'Game of Thrones' plot starts. Imagine a 8th kingdom during Roberts Rebellion, which is also the richest due to the toll fees they charge others. Tywin will scratch his head in frustration.

Yo can you show POVs of the different players of Westoros. Seeing people like Tywin, Ollena, and Rheager's thought on Xander will show how the world is taking the new powerhouse in Essos into their future game plans. Anyways good work with the chapter.

Yo author can you please increase the release time.

So now he's gonna bed them both. Right?

So MC's gonna bang both Black and Green Queen. Right? It seems to be going that way.

Yo why is MC not using his wraging power more. I'm sure he can increase its level with frequent use. Btw I think Auron should tame some tigers with his powers. That'd be cool and will spread his name further.

Great some actions at last. Btw MC can make a trip to Slaver's Bay and get some unsullied. Or he can become a Khal and rule thousands of people. Anyway thanks for the chapter.

Author will there be 'Dance of the Dragon'? Without a war the story would lose its magic. I believe a war against Daemon's children and MC's children would liven the whole experience.

No offence but it feels like the story progression slowed a bit. Would appreciate Auron making some big changes soon. Also will MC visit Valyria by any chance? Cause with a short trip there he'll earn millions of gold easily. Anyways thanks for the chapter.

Yo the Invincible fic, is it done yet?

Things are getting complicated

Bruh it's unreadable. Edit the paragraph ASAP

Yo how bout a tour to Valyria? MC can get some treasures from extinct Dragonlord families. I mean if Euron Greyjoy can make a trip there and survive, I'm sure MC can do the same.

Very good. Hope to see this continue till the Game of Thrones timeline.

Ma dude what you created is pure perfection. A job well done. As far as the story goes only a couple of chapters are left before it ends. So take your time and end it in the most spectacular way possible. Btw don't forget to take nano machine from the OG MC of the novel. Anyways good luck.