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Beyond The Veil.

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Consequences—there’s always a consequence when a deal is struck. Little hidden loopholes are written in between the lines, adding hidden agendas to the contract. I knew it would cost me, and the price I paid was steep. I paid dearly for it.

Now here I am, far from my realm, stripped of everything I had worked for and bound to a powerful entity for all eternity. I have become its servant, given a grand task. I now embark on an extraordinary journey across the vast expanse of a distant galaxy to uncover the mystery that eludes the entity, a galaxy it cannot perceive.

As a young acolyte, Izin was forced into a pact with an unknown entity that expected payment for the power given to him. At the end of his life, the entity has come back for payment, stripping him of his humanity. He is now a tool forged to complete the entity's task

The story will be a slow burn as I try to world-build elements of the story.

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165th
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Just another shameless author hoping the masses will read the novel to any about to read the novel will have slow update because I prefer 700-1000 words

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DubiousTone

I'm really excited about the development of this novel! I've only read the first three chapters, but already I'm hooked. The world the author has created is amazing, full of magic and adventure. The characters are really interesting, and the story is full of surprises. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters and find out what happens next. Bookmarked and eagerly anticipating the release of more chapters.

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hampat

It looks the character will undergo a massive transformation, which makes me curious about the nature of this change. More details could be added to flesh out the story and the character of Izin. I wonderi about the powers that Izin has tapped into, and what their purpose might be. This has great potential for a fantasy or supernatural story, but I think it needs more development to fully engage the readers.

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Ninestar619_5803

This book is pretty interesting. A prince's life and quite exciting plots await. The world-building and the mc development all are fascinating. The writing style is awesome, like the way the author has written each and every details. It quite different and easy flowing. Great author, keep it up!

3mth
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ToufiqUlAlam

Amazing beginning...I loved the way the MC began his journey. It is a world of magic and mystery - just the kind of story I love. It's still too early to say how the story will turn out to be, Keep writing author!! Amazing story!!

7mth
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3rdTired_worker

I can see the changes to the world building and I like it

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