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Reborn as Kakashi's older brother with the power to control time.
I do this translation just for pleasure
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1 Thing hate i really that you don't understand the correct use from she, he, him, her and his. He, him and his you use for man She and her is for woman The rest is a really good Translation GOOD WORK^^
best naruto fanfiction I've read and I've read a lot of them. I like the main character and how he demolishes hiruzen. dude deserves it. I like how he saves the Uchiha too.
this translation is better, no Chinese slang or whatever you called it, stable update, readable, good job for the translator, keep up the nice job
stable updates and the quality from the translation is really good. I can say it is one from the best translation of this novel on site. Really good Job
honestly, taking a break from this circa chapter 199 because its getting really old and annoying. im really tired of everyone always expressing their shock in full paragraphs all the time. its wasting my time. its also losing its power scaling that was never really faithful to the original anyways but now is getting more than a little bit annoying. Not only is it rushed but the developments have significantly dropped in quality and logic. what finally broke the camel's back though is messing with the main character of the original's backstory. probably going to drop this afterall, especially since after the naruto verse its one piece next just based on the chapter headings and the narutoverse story is both impossibly drawn out and rushed at the same time. I swear we could cut these chapters by 30% if we just took out everyone's pointless reactions to everything. my rating is only as high as it is because of the good performance from the author at the beginning.
I just want to know why if she's not going to have a harem and romance they didn't let rin marry Kakashi??.............,................................
This Review is based: 20 Writing - there are error but i got no problem with it as long as i understand it 4 ⭐ Story Development - A good story but slow pacing which I don't like 4 ⭐ Characters - The mc is smart but stupid sometimes, he decided to hide his power for years just to be revealed because of he decided to kill a dude that will be killed somehow... then all his trouble is vain Updating Stability - dc about this part 5 ⭐ World Background - no world background 2 ⭐ Evaluation - people who like mc dominating and take and do what he wants then this isn't for you For the author - i guess i like it but im not ganna continue it as it was long and i dont have much time for this
From the Naruto Arc, to the One Piece Arc and even the halfway through the One Punch Man Arc, I enjoyed reading everything. However...the author might be a 'pervert' in a sense...
I read up to chapter 240. I liked it, but I am unsure if I will continue reading. First off, the translation is decent, about a 3.5/5. It's just put into google translate and then into Grammarly. It's not proofread, and you will see many errors. The overall story is average. It's a Chinese novel, so you already know what to expect. But it brought up some interesting, thought-provoking ideas, and the side characters were decent. I thought it did a good job on the political side. Overall, I am going to say it's an above-average novel. 3/5.
This is without a doubt the best translation of this novel on the site to the point it’s not even comparable that being said let’s talk about the story it is one of the most satisfying naruto stories out there it has the same epicness as the godlike hokage fanfic where he gets the gura gura no mi and it leaves you wanting to read the next chap ASAP
why did he have to go to one piece.This is what I hat about fanfics.The mc will just travel from one world to another.
Not bad, it wasn't slowphased as I expected but it wasn't that bad. it's readable, the mc certainly an op character and I like that it included different world aside from Naruto world. I'm certainly thrilled about Saitama vs Mc chapter. I Love that chapter.
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this is basically a wish fulfillment novel the mc is busted beyond belief he can already kill most kage level enemies at the age of 10 all the interactions he have with any female characters makes you wish to kill yourself for reading this novel but I have been skipping all his interactions with women so far all female characters are just throwing their selves at him and he is accepting at all so this is basically a harem novel tho that's something to be expected in a wish fulfillment novel the ability mc gets from system has already made him basically invincible the translator dunno the difference between he she him her so if you didn't know a new character from the anime you wouldn't know their gender lol overall pretty meh the idea is cool but it seems like one of those Chinese novels
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Easily one of the best Naruto fanfics in existence! The story is really good and the characters are enjoyable. It's a bit rushed in chap 100+ he is already Hokage level and the time skipped many times and you only learn it a few 10 chaps later. Also it's really annoying the author really can't use he, she , it , them , I , they etc correctly. So sometimes females are he and males are she. But overall the story it self is nice and I enjoy it a lot so far :)
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por lo menos ya supero en capitulos a la otra traduccion en este sitio web, espero que lo completes ya que al parecer el autor esta volviendo a publicar capitulos (o eso creo, ya que se actualizo en mtlnovel con otros capitulos). asi que espero mucho de vos y que termines todo
Best translation. Much better than the other one on this site. Well done I can tell you put in the effort. ……………………………………………………………………………………..