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Your synopsis is just great, it left my jaw hanging. And opening is good but there isn't much to read but family love was appreciated and looking forward to moar chapters keep up the good work!
It is great! I can imagine and feel the story with its atmosphere. Especially when the father defended him from many people that tried to kill him. I need more!
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Pretty Great start. There is nothing much to read currently with just a single chapter but I hope to continue reading more chapters with same quality.
a good start, can't say anything about story now as there is still one chapter, I will add it to my library and look forward to further chapters
Hello everyone, Ask_hd here. So basically this is the new story that I came up with and I have full plans to finish it. I hope you all can help me with it and do tell if there is anything out of the place. Yours truly, Ask_hd.
Now, don't get me wrong your story has potential. However, I only have a gist of what your story truly entails. So until you release a couple more chapters I won't change my rating. But do continue writing and remember to pace and structure your story. So it doesn't feel rushed or discombobulated.