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Kaiwa Narumi is the greatest living creature to ever exist.
You should be glad to even breathe the same air as her.
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Overall it's an extremely enjoyable story, with a good concept, interesting characters, and great story development. Now I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next upload. Keep up the good work! [img=fp]
The story is so good and promising-looking for more to come and the plot is really interesting and I can't wait for the new chapter thank you [img=coins]
Very nice start, I will definitely keep reading. Can't wait to know what happens next. Exciting! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
Just read this book, i recommend it. You will not regret it! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
writing.suffers from this unbearable slowness, author doesn't know how people talk or think and dialogue is painful to read. Things happen all of a sudden and a Japanese names are shoehorned in for no reason when compared to other more fantasy names. The author seems to want to write a pure angel of a protagonist but can do little more than telling us he takes care of his mother to connect the reader. To the author of you intend to keep writing please take a look at other stories in the same vain, like kumo desu ga nani ka, overlord, average, white fang etc, on other sites, and take some time to see how they build their worlds and dialogue. To end this off words like indeed don't make your writing sound sophisticated the way you use them but rather klunky, please if this is your first novel or you are not studying creative writing and classical literature, avoid the thesaurus problem, by this I don't mean using actually sophisticated words but rather using useless fluff words that mean nothing like indeed and reasonable in an excessive amount. Aside from that novel suffers from the " a woman spoke to me boss, he is very nice, She must be the company manager" syndrome and it's just very hard to read and take seriously. I can't bring myself to recommend this book in it's current state for any reason.as it's just a slog to read and oppressively boring.
Good story, Dark and interesting to read. The character's design is amazing. MC is by far the best but still has a lot of potential. The writing was great. World background is also great. Overall this is worth the read.[img=exp]