I approve of more murder
ch 36 Blood Lines
Fantasy · invayne
also AMAZING chap :)
ch 34 Boiling Blood
Fantasy · invayne
Sidenote: but a little blerb saying XP is distributed after battle ends would be nice, ir at least that it's distributed In chunks if you plan to have her level up during a battle to win at some point, but it's a little confusing as to why she hasn't leveled up 5000, times and gotten enough stoned to evolve again
ch 34 Boiling Blood
Fantasy · invayne
the Google translate is strong with this one
I named him Kurimuzonhōn (Crimson Horn in Japanese)
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
Hacking is a slow premeditated thing, your not faster than a computer and you certainly aren't going to implement a novel new decryption method in minutes, aside from the fact that this is just establishing the mc as a total Mary sue, its just one of my pet peeves, it just irks me when people seem to think hacking is something you do on the fly, and frame apart of the work I do as, talent based and quick once you get it, rather than the complex process it really is. Cyber attacks can happen in milliseconds, they aren't designed in milliseconds.
Those who knew his real name were few, as he broke his ties with others after he decided to be Reina's shadow. He dealt with the underground activity as an informant most of the time, but his true skill laid in the hacking department. If he and Reina were to compete in hacking, he would win by a hair's breadth, only losing in some cases where he lost focus.
Fantasy · illeannne
You keep mixing perspectives, I can see what your going for here but rather than invoking a sense of mystery, this just makes it hard to read. If you ever write any future novels, that switch from point of view as rapidly as this one does, consider a future version of the character or an outside observer doing the extra bits. Also for first person active, don't hesitate to use sound effects, contrary to what some English teachers might say slang and the like doesn't always detract from your writing, tone is a big thing in novels and is hard to master same with points of view. That's why you see new authors mark their points of views all the time. Anyway that's my piece, I certainly don't mean to be mean. The person typed aggravatedly.
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Fantasy · JUnknownC
this piece of garbage *author* strikes again stealing other people's translations from elsewhere and having the gall to publish them not only publicly but as original works, please go find this novel on novel updates, and report the author if that is a feature
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Realistic · OmnipresenceBeing