Naruto: Manipulating The Ninja World Behind the Scenes

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Rebel_Royal5

whelp I rarely live ratings seems like a waste of time especially when it's a story that's Horrible but I see potential in this story and like the flow keep it up

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M_Loe

The chapters are pretty much short. But The Fanfic is amazing. Hope you make the chapters longer. ..:88:&;83;98;&;&;&;&;&;&;&;&;&;& Djdkfkdmfj

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CharAznable

Although the author is a beginner, and has a lot to improve in the matter of plot, but there is a point that I like very much in this story, there are several naruto stories out there, but the author has managed to create something new, and this should be valued, take my 5 stars.

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Jakai_Brown21

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Daoistpz6vNS

Well there are only three chapters for now, but it feels very interesting and the writing is pretty good too. Looking forward to it. lets gooooooo

LV 4

Geokit

overall it's really good absolutely perfect if you like a dark story with an evil MC the problem is it's just not for me I give things like this try and be like do I like it do I not and i'mma be A hundred with you chief this is really good it's just not for me so I recommend giving it a try anyway you might like it

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Gd_Sys

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LV 3

UnsympatheticMoron

The main problem as far as I can see it, is the irrelevance of character development in this story. While everyone loves a good powerwank, myself included, it takes the thrill of a story away. The writing is good. Few, if any, errors in spelling or grammar. Could do with longer or more detailed paragraphs. Working within a framework for the plot might prove to be a better, if not entirely novel approach to the story. All that matters is that the Author enjoys writing it. Keep up the good work.

LV 4

DaoistoSXxRV

The chapter are short but the idea is interesting the thing i enjoy the most is using the shop for more then himself i really want to see more and i enjoy different power systemes in different worlds.

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demxntia

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AStrAl_Soul

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LuminouShadow

This is a villain fic. If you don't like the villanous MC, then don't read. Though the story has a lot of potential. No, this is a person from our world that is treating this as a game as rationally as he can. Many will find fault with that concept, so if you don't like it don't read it.

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AStrAl_Soul

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BeguilingIncubus

update please...

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Ainzsamaa

very recommended good very good !!!!!!! 5 stars for you .... !!!!! . . . ...... ....... ....... ............................ .......................

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Daoist7M5Pfg

this is wonderful. Don't give up on this wonderful work. ......,……………………………………,,………………………………......................................................

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XenMon_Rizky

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Drake_san

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Iamxourtingdeath

Shamelessly giving myself five stars. I hope you enjoy my fanfic ..........................................................................x