Webnovel Author: HaracasAye - Fanfic Collection

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Its dissapointing for all the reasons ive stated. Having feelings for family is a part of it. I find the whole concept of a person with a family in past life taking new parents and siblings unbelievable. Imagine if one day you find urself living amongst strangers, can you call them mother, father and brother even if they treat you well? Author there are an infinite number of weaknesses one can have they dont have to be so predictable. Weakness of family and killing, are the most cliche ones used for heroic mcs.

All the issues I have with the novel author can be summed up in one statement. Keep your characters consistent. You treat the mc like a child in some cases and an adult in others. If he was a child I agree, he shud be hesitant about killing, not yet have a goal and require character development. But he is an adult whose lived in the world for 10 years.

This novel has alot of good. It reads nicely. The characters are decent and the setting is given its fair due but there are things about it I find puzzling. Many times I find myself wondering what role the spacefaring civilization bent on conquering the world serves. The mc has no problem annihilating them and the story so far has to do with the locals of the world. It feels like a missed opportunity or something added on after the fact to give the novel a different flavour. By making the mc so strong that the spacers are no threat to his conquest it renders their presence pointless. Why not just make this a hard fantasy in that case? Then there is also the nature of the time loop genre. By showing us the mc attaining his goal only to be thrown back to the beginning and being forced to change doesnt make for a very enjoyable read. Especially so as he starts a villain, where will he end in that case?