The System of Cultivating Immortality

LV 3

Daoist_IMMORTAL

First one dead I guess...so lemme make this sacrifice and see if it's edible or not...good luck for me!!*................... ...................... ................*SAYONARA** ....

LV 4

SkeletonSama6969

i will test first if it's a poison good luck for me.....................................................................................

LV 1

Single_Boi

WHat happened author, the chaps are not showing hxyrjzjtddsmustrmusryutumrj ktj t uteeyye y yuuy tei e7i u tiiu ut tui td uy y dfyrisyw t7i7it sts

LV 1

TTTrrr

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LV 4

badboyz999

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LV 2

BlackSnowAngel

The chapters and writing are smooth to read and the character have a life of their own. This story has a gamer + cultivation vibe to it if you like this type of story. What i would like to see a bit more is some more showing then telling, when the pacing of the story slows down a lt certain area. Keep it up author!