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Light, a high school boy who was always bullied for having the least amount of potential mostly by Sakurai until when they were in a gym was pissed and tried to scorch his balls.
[Deplete horniness or die from horniness]
[going into sexual maniac mode]
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Write a reviewLight kills his father and grandfather (plot twist)๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Reveal SpoilerAuthor here:I had some problems with my phone so I reset and I forgot my email password so I have lost everything. I will continue it on another account Ja_ka_
It's a nice book if I must say. The characters are kinda interesting. The title is great. The Author should still try to work well on the book! All the best!
To be honest, I'm not really into reading the 18+ kind of stories but since I was curious about the plots so I'll just give it a try. The chapters seems interesting although it was too short. Anyways, keep it up author๐๐ป
Author JakaGKJ14
I'm sorry to say but there are lot of errors in the story. First the grammar, second the usage of marks, third please build a sentence shorter and complete thought. Do not use emojis in a story to show emotion/action such as laughing. Third, uhm flow of your story, it's confusing. fourth, this book needed a major editing. I know this probably the first story of the author but there are still rooms for improvement. Sorry for my criticism. I believe this story have a potential after the edited version. I also suggest to use Grammarly for grammar check. I'm sorry.