Webnovel Author: JakaGKJ14 - Novel Collection

I love the whole story but the title is commonly used which is bad for publicity and some words are in the wrong places other than that i like it

Thanks for the comment I have updated it and hope I improved.

The story is generallyyy nice and the intro keeps you hooked but one thing is your book cover isn't alluring and there is still room for improvement but nice book

I love the plot and the traditional vibe it gives it is definitely a good one and the characters are really well thought of and nice introduction

I love the beginning it really sets out for bigger events and I love it from the revenge he I looking for and it has a really good plotttttttt

The plot is really good and well paced and it has mature content which is always a plus and updating stability is a ok plus the characters are well deatailed

I would have given it aa five but there are so many plot holes in chapter one but the story is really nice an the characters are written really well