INCESSANT

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Himakar_Reddy

Nice story line. Waiting to know more about your story. Twist plot is very nice and this plot is superb 👍👍 . I hope the next chapters are going to make a superb response . Thank you ❤️❤️❤️

INCESSANT A gripping story line with a very good character archs twists are good way of explanation is good selection of characters is upto the mark

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Wendrila_Kundu

Okay, I am a reader and a writer. I am looking for a good read. And this one is dope. I like how the author put the plot twists with such a fine line between frustration and excitement every time. Haha. Honestly, this book is really awesome to read, I'd recommend everyone, whos looking for a weekend good read. This book is for you

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Lacyan

Keep up the good work—I can see that the author is putting a lot of effort into this. There are things to improve upon but the general premise is interesting.

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Shuri_Suki

Interesting plot. I would say that I have read some stories of the kind and this one holds up to such. This one is worth keeping notice of. Can't wait for more updates.

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SUPER STORY WITH SUPER TWISTS . ALL WE WILL AWESOME OF HIS WORK . WAITING FOR MORE [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Akuma_Sensei

I don't really read sci.fi so this is somewhat new for me, but I enjoy reading this story never the less. The plot is interesting and the character's personalities make it even more so, not to mention the plot twists. I think this is a well written story, keep it up.