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pp和待修改
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such a very good book the battles scenes are almost perfect .The story development for this book is so good that when you are reading you feel like you are in it. I applaud the writer
If you are looking to drop right into the action of the world this tale will do that for you. decent battle right from that start to kick this off and start world building.
Love the cover, the tittle, the synopis, the workd design, very good book author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Not a bad read at all, the way the story is told makes it easy to follow along. The fact that he also gets a great boost from the start is also interesting, and not like those novels that drag out his pain, so I enjoyed it.
The world building is amazing. I can tell that author feels at ease when writing the story. Usually first-perspective story feels robotic somehow but author has magnificently pulled this off into a masterpiece. Great job!
Loving the new look, writer is making progress and putting a lot of effort and it shows. Looking forward to reading the next chapter![img=update]
Story is still in early phases but it has good bones. The characters are interesting and we are just getting into how the boy and death are getting along. It has a lot of potential depending on what path the author chooses. The grammar could use a lot of tightening, but you do get used to it. Great work!
Another great story by Purple Ink Patron, but yet it's not getting enough credit it deserves, I personally think the story's update should be more frequent
A shameless Author Review. In simple terms, I like this one, I really do. It's fun thinking the characters out thoroughly and then writing them in. But, if you are reading it around the time that this review is initially put up then it is still in its early stages and doesn't have frequent updates. I promise to try to fix that. I understand I am an infantile Author but I hope that this concept can get even a bit of attention from a few readers. If you follow the story righteously, it does get quite fun to read through and, who knows, (I wish) you could possibly read more than once. But that won't be possible unless I reach a good word count. My characters are completely thought out and will have all the depth necessary to make them relatable & Amazing. My world building will be smooth and I'll try to not make it feel forced. I'll also avoid clichés and overused tropes to the best of my ability. I will try to keep things easy to understand for the most part. This is my WSA Entry and any support, in any manner will do; Reading, Rating, Reviewing, Adding to your library, Voting ETC, will all be of great help. I also would like constructive criticism because I am unfortunately not perfect (Yet) and I can still be considered a green horn. I'll not be reluctant to accept and adjust my mistakes if they are pointed out. Enjoy Reading. ... Check my profile for my Author Discord for further discussions, if desired.