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After an arduous journey from the city to the countryside, strange things
and voices happen behind walls and in the forest behind the village, and questions come to the boy Ivan about what is there
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I hope you get to know more about the other characters and define them Because your focus is on the world only, not on the characters. Thank you
I just want the rest of the chapters to be longer than the first because I love to read this kind of fantasy I want you to have more of them
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The good thing is that you have evolved in presenting the world ...............................................................................
The first time you write a long chapter Sorry this is just a joke . _____________________________________________________________________
I liked it more than the first ( Diary ) ....................................................................................................................
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