/ Urban / Forever Dreaming
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Shanti Araleth had always been a dreamer. Dreaming of a better life, a better world...Anything, really. But eventually, all dreams and hopes were given up on, for fate was cruel. And Shanti knew he was much, much crueler. His grasp was far too tight, too suffocating. Flowers cannot survive without sunlight and freedom; Shanti was no exception. Her future seemed bleak, non existent even. Is life truly worth living anymore if there was no future waiting in the horizon?
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Pretty entertaining read. I can't say anything about the stability yet since as of writing this, it only has one chapter. As for the world background, it wasn't really touched that much on yet. Very well written story nonetheless.
WritingWithJones has transformed into ReviewingWithJones! The writing quality is, in my eyes, really well written! I didn't see any grammatical errors or typos. Since this a pretty recent novel, I still have no idea of the frequency of updates. Since this is still in the second chapter, the story is pretty underdeveloped, though I will change it once we get deeper into this. The character's are good and their personalities are different. I still don't know much about the world background, but I'll change my rating once we get more chapters.
Writing quality: So far has been decent however I noticed several grammar mistakes. They were minor so it didn’t make it unreadable. Updating stability: Hasn’t been out long enough to know yet Story development: Too short of a prologue and to early into the story so it’s a three Character design: Not far enough into the story World design: Not far enough into the story
I'll give the writing quality 5 it was good but it doesn't have emotion but it's okay Story development: 5 since it was still too early to give one Character design: still to early Updating stability: good for now maybe World background: still too early
I'm attempting to read more works of varying genres and the writing quality combined with character's personality, details and expressions throughout led me to be intrigued. I'm curious as to what will happen in the future. Keep it up, author!