Webnovel Author: GODOFCAT - Novel Collection

GODOFCAT

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the story line was good and the grammar had a little bit mistakes but not to serious, the charather design was little but bland so i suggest to improve it then the world background was perfect, then the story development was still undecided since it was still on early stage then tha update stability it was good so everthing is 5/5

GODOFCAT

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Replied to Lazy_Pen_Master

still on hiatus just wait lol

ch 546 Returning to the Shadow Realm

GODOFCAT

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Replied to Ninej

tnx I decided to slowly reveal his backstory since if I wrote all of it, it will take 100+ chapters or more

"What the hell your sorry could do? Can it resuscitate innocent people? Can it revive my friends? NO! It can't do anything if I broke a glass and said 'I'm sorry,' will it get fixed? NO RIGHT!" yelled Daniel in a sarcastic tone.

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GODOFCAT

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Replied to Ninej

yeah but Daniel had a reason... just wait for his backstory btw thank you for reading [img=recommend]

"Where were you when my friend was tortured in front of me? Where were you when the orphanage was massacred? Huh? Where are you? Probably watching it all happen," Daniel argued as the veins in his neck were about to burst.

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GODOFCAT

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Replied to Ninej

No, I'm talking about people who didn't do anything serious crime like kill someone and stuff. Of course, there are also real innocent victims, such as the victims of the orphanage massacre (which is what Daniel said earlier)

"What the hell your sorry could do? Can it resuscitate innocent people? Can it revive my friends? NO! It can't do anything if I broke a glass and said 'I'm sorry,' will it get fixed? NO RIGHT!" yelled Daniel in a sarcastic tone.

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GODOFCAT

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Replied to Tacosrule123

it's back

ch 0 1 note

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GODOFCAT

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Replied to Lazy_Pen_Master

what is confusing?

ch 0 4 chapter 4 the ancient one

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GODOFCAT

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Replied to Lazy_Pen_Master

???

ch 0 4 chapter 4 the ancient one

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GODOFCAT

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Replied to Rayne_Rue

open your discord

He hurriedly plopped his body up against the tree as soon as he got behind it, he tore off his clothes and sat down. His hands began to tremble as he stroked his injured thighs with a soft garment; he warped it tightly while groaning in pain.