DEVIL'S HOUR

so far so great, everything is fireeee, cant wait for what comes next, this i promise to follow to the ver very end. it has all the qualities of a great novel and should be in everyones lib

Not baad, got the start of something good. Waiting for what comes next, hope it is as good as the beginning which is really promising. All the best to the little author

This is good. You got something good going on little author. Keep cultivating on this and you are gonna be great. I like how the plot is slowly building up. I have the itch of knowing what comes next.

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Mapguy

.....well....I didn't see that coming. what an interesting story. The writing is nice and descriptive. it made every thing easy to envision. The characters are also quite a mysterious in a way. I like it, keep it up