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“I didn't ask to be in the Naruto world. I didn't ask to be a Mutant. Am I complaining? No.”
Follow the Journey of Agni Hyūga in his endeavors of becoming stronger.
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im very interested. please dont drop. i somewhat read your other fanfic and it didnt catch my attention very well. it didnt hook me, but this one, i hope it can be better.
This is edgy with no need to be the mc is OP from the start with a wolverine level healing factor which immediately puts him above everyone in terms of strenght which will probally lead to him unlocking tensaigan/rennigan. The only saving grace is the grammer but i can tell this author will burn out. He probally has an actual author account somewhere on this site and he is a burner.
I really don't like how he is with other characters and i don't understand why he's feeling bad for sasuke, he's seems like a pushover 😒 Not my type of story.
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Well thought out and beautifully executed.. It's even better that you are not restricted by canon and are creative enough to show us the effects of your actions on canon. The life you bring to the characters and the believability of their personalities it just awesome. The atmosphere in Konoha and the sneakiness of the top branch is just perfect considering the potential of the MC.. You did a wonderful job with Hinata and the Hyuga clan as a whole. I'm anticipating what you have in store for Naruto as well and I'm pretty certain that I won't be disappointed... I do hope you finish this one though..
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I've got nothing but positives to say about this fic, and I'm being genuine here. From the top, the writing quality is top notch, smooth as buttah and very pleasing. I'm no English teacher but I couldn't spot any grammar errors, or anything amiss with the punctuality. Brownie points for the massive chapters too! I never personally cared about the "Stability of Updates'' criteria, but for the sake of the review I'll go over it. That being said, this fic only has 5 chapters as of right now, and going by the app, chapters one and two were released within 24h of each other, chapters three and four were released 9 days later, both within 24h of each other as well. Chapter 5 was released 20h ago and 10 days from the last. Needless to say, this is as stable as it gets, an already impressive feat considering the length of the chapters. On to the next part. The developments have me hooked for good, the very first lines of chapter one had me captured and it's only gotten better since. The developments flow seamlessly together, nothing seems to contradict and it all makes sense. There are extremes, but in my personal opinion, this is a realistic take on the Shinobi world and all of it is impeccably developed. The character design is awesome, for all Naruto fans, the way to their hearts is a cool looking doujutsu, no ifs ands or buts. A mysterious looking byakugan, the white hair, the elegance, all of it just fits well together to make who we know as Agni. That being said, the cannon characters all feel fleshed out, they aren't ooc and all of them add to the story and its progression. Amazing job! The world background and the building of it is very well done, it's worded in a way that isn't confusing, and it actually paints a picture for us. Whether it's the world as a whole or just a scene in the moment, then again this might just be me being biased, I've always had a vivid imagination. All that being said, an incredibly solid 5 star review for this new fic. I am sooooooo looking forward to reading more.
Ayo dude, don't let the negative reviews get to you. It's fkin WN, a lot of the users are too addicted to the trash harem sm*t fics to enjoy the finer things in life. Just let em be and don't drop this fic. P.S. Waiting for the other fic to update