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The author needs an editor or a beta reader to help the story flow and to keep the names straight.
it was a Naruto fic but halfway through it suddenly became Dragonball like what the duck is going on. I was okay with bad grammar and bad translation but this I don't lik
The story has promise but it needs to be edited as well as the author needs to take some math classes as well.Random chinese names pop out of nowhere and also the story turned into dragon ball z for no reason this whole story should just be deleted tbh
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It was okay but the Author has to fix some of the names not only that but for some reason there is DBZ in it when it clearly supposed to be a naruto fanfic I think the Author accidentally added but it completely ruined it for me.
hello can someone tell me how did dragon ball z come in Naruto