I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata.

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Anime_Fan_1574

Waiting for new update. Keep it up author. For words quota : GG GG GG GG GG ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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IceGlaze

i love the story, best way portrayed Indian mythology into the masterpiece.

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Abc_Def_1158

bro is trying to make evil look good . I think you should have done more research. your novel is all about praising karna and degrading Krishna and pandava,you have to know that yudhisthira never become the king of hastinapur , arjuna created a kingdom called indrapasth for his elder brother even in mahabharata yuddha they wanted was indrapastha not hastinapur , in ch 47 you cursed kunti for the death of 6 people but not said anything about kaurava who had put the fire on lakshgrih you got effect of kali on your mind. let me tell youduryodhana was incarnation of kali , karna was reincarnation of a demon who was killed by Nar -Narayana (arjuna krishna) he had the boon of 10,000 armor and out of them 9,999 was destroyed by nar(arjun) karna was reincarnated with remaining one armor. It's OK if you are fan of karna I also like his kindness but you literally had made him god like , many say karna is surya putra so he is prince of celestial bodies but as indra putra arjuna is prince of deva, he even rejected the chance to be in swarga lok for his elder brother , if arjun or pandava knew karna was his elder brother they would never go against him. karna was killed for his sin of participation in abhimanyu death . Arjuna had pashupatatra that can easily destroy earth and you think he can't destroy an armor. (It was my opinion your novel your wish , but I can't see people choosing good over evil, you are fan of karna, I am fan of arjuna you had your frustration I got my frustration after reading your fan fiction , if my word hurted you then I am sorry but all I had spoken is fact you can't deny it karna was paying for his karm of previous life and was earning the karma in dwapar yug arjun also got punished for every mistake he did and he accepted it not denied like other )

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Lag_Overloaded

My first time see a Mahabharata fic . ...Thanks and Best of Luck Author (っ'-')╮=͟͟͞͞💌(っ'-')╮=͟͟͞͞💌(っ'-')╮=͟͟͞͞💌(っ'-')╮=͟͟͞͞💌(っ'-')╮=͟͟͞͞💌(っ'-')╮=͟͟͞͞💌

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I_Am_YourDad

Why don't you write a book about reincarnating as Jesus or something? Mahabharata is NOT a piece of fiction.

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super_saiyan_blue

I hope you know the word"LIMIT" because if you cross this line it will not be good,and I hope ther will be fanfic for mohammad ,oh just write it happens in other universe ,I will count for how many days you will be alive

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Kaizou_Koi

I really like the story of mahabharat and karan is my favourite character in it.So I am really happy that there is a novel about him.I just hope that the author does not become inconsistent and drop this novel.I really want him to finish this novel so that I can read with a peace of mind

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dash9274

I was always a fan of karna from childhood when I first heard of Mahabharata. I even searched for such fics many times but never found one. So I am looking forward to read this story and hope it'll do justice to karna.

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Bla_Bla_2562

I think that Mc should try to aim for the reform of society and create a kingdom as per the rules of the vedas that is based on the duties executed by a person their caste will be decided you can take reference of this type of kingdom building from another set of fictional Indian novel by AMISH the immortals of meluha in which the kingdom of meluha had laws which were based on the old vedas. I always felt that it was a shame that Karna didn't do anything for people who faced similar situation like him and we're exploited and made fun of . And since most of the kingdoms wouldn't want this the entire world will become his enemy and scheme against him. Fitting for the overpowered Mc.

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DaoistCVzQcQ

Not worth it. you don't touch religious scriptures .

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mikey12

if you are writing a fiction then do not touch any existing religions, you should be ashamed by doing so under the guise of freedom of speech, and you are doing this to the existing EPIC, YOU ARE NOT QUALIFIED TO DO SO. Put your effort and create your fictional gods and evils but I guess you are not capable to do so.

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spear_Dem0N

author i want you to drop this novel right now i won't hesitate to take legal action I'd make sure you're behind the bars

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Luohuo

The twist in premise is good. I always liked karna because of Fate grand order so this mahabharata premise is really nice umu.The hate for this book is so narrow-minded and just stereotype hindu as a whole. Kinda sad to see people like this here.Author you should really just nuke the comments who criticize you based on the premise you are using. they are just waste of space and it's not even good experience to scroll past the comments to see actual review 😑

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Bijoy_Biswakarma_9338

brother as a indian i really appreciate your work. please don't drop in the middle because for some reason or people criticism. I really glad some author try to wrote a book with our history. lastly good work

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OVERKILL

reason i like 1. a story about Mahabharat2. a story about Karan 3. a story of many legendary figures .4. changing the story5. changing the fate of many unfortunate peoples .6. I'm bored 😒7. i liked when MC misunderstood something and do over the top things. it gives the feeling of "The Eminence in Shadow" ** what i hate**1.. changing the history but since its a fanfic i don't care even if it make me uncomfortable .but it cost money so it's not a fanfic 2. if you are writing it in English then why bother with so many Hindi and Sanskrit words . just use father , mother instead of pitashree .. ( use Hindi words in moderation that actually means something .3 . I like story and side story also some details but ... you have straching it too much . explaining simple things twice and thrice too much .4 . story pace is to slow and chapters are small .a single chapter is worthless for a single scenario you are using multiple chapters 5. paid chapter start too early and these small chapters cost 2 fp. it forces you to go pirate . 6. there are too many legendary figures and too many epic storyline so why bother with harem nonsense .7 . you streched the fact about his troublesome harem life , harem fight , jealousy , raising the flags or what not . why.... ????he is in ancient times where harem is common for a king so why trouble us with useless things .you could add some fun and little drama in chapters but no .. you are wasting tons of chapter for his harem that is not even started yet. why... in ancient times more than 5000 years ago, and this reincarnated guy can't handle harem of little girls . why...?Google says krishna has more than 16107 wife .8. why on the earth a Star child blood line bans Harem,.. for what reason . it shouldn't even mention harem in first place . you could just say that his soul is from kalyug so it encourages or discourage the harem , why blood line .....? 9. some time author looks more biased than Bisham

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Vishal_Andher

it is great but please keep updating it is good book . let the power of suryaputra be shining ... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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kan_inn

this is the best novel i ever read on webnovel but sadly updates are not frequent otherwise this is very good novel i hope author will update this novel

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DEVIL_ANIMES

i really like this one but man why are you ignoring this one, i am also reading your other novels and they are good but please don't drop this one, i will give you a five stars if you continue this novel ✌️

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Blank0121

Ahem! It is my first time reading a Mahabharata fic. At first I thought it would be no fun but oh boy was I wrong. It is a master piece. I really enjoyed reading every chapter. Although I am a little sad about update stability. Anyways check this novel out.

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EvilSovereignty

Sorry for the image review it’s cause of the garbage web novel cen sor ing __________________________________——————————————————————-1111-1————-________________________________________________