/ Fantasy / under the spell
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What will you do if you can turn back the time but be ready for the consequences and uncertainty of the future because of the action you do for the sake of a better outcome second time.
Hee sun who got the chance to stop the past tragedy by going back in the past.
Will she be able to change the past this time and regret that she was not able to convey her feelings in the past.
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Okay, I read your first chapter and it was honestly really good, but like the two reviewers just said, I think the writing quality is pretty bad and needs some improvements. For example, there are lack of quotation marks for the dialogues in here and the main character reading the letter needs to be in single quote to prevent some confusion. Overall, great story and I hope it would improve soon.
As your first review i dont want be harsh, but i also think that theres a lot to improve here. first off, writing quality is pretty bad. there are typos, missing quotations, sometimes sentences just dont make sense. Its a new spin on the way that the fmc goes back in time, which is nice and this could also definitely turn into some ‘feel good’ story. theres just a lot of improvement in grammar that has to be made. doesnt need to be very descriptive, just enough to make it easier for the reader to understand.
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Looks interesting but needs improvement like the conversations can't be understood that well. There are many typos. But I think if you improve this it will be good.