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Everyone will definitely have super abilities in time. Likewise with other creatures, including beasts.
A person who can control elements, someone who can transform into other creatures; someone who has a guardian spirit; and those who have other super abilities.
Being the best, greatest, and strongest is everyone's goal. Many of them seek strength by justifying everything.
Many super-capable groups emerged that wanted to have power. Big families, organizations, companies, sects, and guilds sprang up to fight for power.
Threats from beasts and other creatures appear. In addition, threats from other countries and kingdoms are commonplace.
A teenage boy who lost his family due to a power struggle awakens a super ability that has mutated and is likely to mutate again. A super ability that allows him to use various kinds of super abilities by making special puppets.
Revenge? Become the strongest? Create the largest organization?
He wants to do all that; he is Jono Sagara!
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Hey! This is my first novel. Because English is not my native language, I am aware that I still have many shortcomings in grammar, writing techniques, and other areas. I hope you guys still able to enjoy it! Give me your feedback and comment on the shortcomings of my novel. Thank you so much!
at the beginning of the first 20 chapters the story was a bit boring, the story started to get interesting at the 30th chapter, I think this novel has a good future.
A promising plot and development. I'd say the few things are info overload. Sometimes I find my self getting a little lost with the descriptions of things because there's just so much technical information all at once. Grammar could be improved but I think the flow would be better as well once the info overload is sorted. Very promising, keep improving [img=recommend]
Your story holds potential. I can see that you have a very clear image in your head of how your story looks and plays out, but due to a lack of rhythm in your writing, a protagonist that could be better developed, and repeated grammar and sentence structure mistakes, it fails to come across. Overall, I believe you can get there. You just have to keep practicing. You might want to consider hiring an editor, a least until your English improves. I wish you the best of luck!
This is the first novel of this genre that I have ever read, and this actually made me interested in the storyline of this novel. Overall, I think this novel is good, but your writing technique should be improved. Keep it up! Good Luck![img=recommend]
Hello, first thing first, I was overwhelmed by how you tried to describe the world and it's system. I was confused and had to try to read it again. There aren't many grammatical errors but try not using repeated words. You have a great plot, but your world background and character design needs improvement.
The writing is nice, although there is room for development, such as with certain repeated words that could be replaced with alternatives, etc. Overall, though, I enjoyed reading it, and I would especially recommend this to readers who prefer this kind of novel.
The concept is a unique one and from the title my guess is that MC will be a puppeteer/necromancer? This alone has gotten me hooked and from how far I've read the author writing is great. Am looking to read on this story as it's quite interesting.
Your story is nice. The Building of it is nice. I hope the author can continue his work more and make his dream successful. I again say, the story is good. May the stars align for him.
I had to read it a lot of times to try and understand the world, so I'd say try to improve on it. But the quality of the writing is very good, which at least gives a better understanding of the book.
nice plot and intriguing characters, over the story has great story and can't wait for more
this actually has a good idea, but there are still some shortcomings that need to be improved such as the storyline and the depiction of the world's background in this novel.
The novel concept seem solid so far and I hope the author continues to develop the story. I've always been a fan of big world and world building, so I wish the author the best of luck!
interesting start i think the grandfather is an intriguing character...world building is good... storyline seems promising...there are spelling mistakes I think you can use grammarly for corrections..but I'm giving 5 stars because as a non-native English speaker i can understand that some mistakes are likely to happen, it doesn't change how good the story is...best of luck
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The plot is astonishing, and the characters and the situations have been written very well, This book is full of surprises! Good work author! Best of luck
A pretty interesting read overall, the writing is quite awesome though everyone has space to improve. The plot and storyline is amazing to be honest so great job Author ^.^! [img=recommend][img=update]
I love the storyline of this novel and how you to describe the world is quite good for me, but you must improve your writing technique and grammar overall, i like it!
Uww never read this kind of story before... Its kinda new to me and that's why l enjoyed reading it... Also l found the world background really cool... Author has really worked hard to build such a nice and unique story...All the best and keep writting...
A beautiful first attempt. Good work author. There’s so much to look forward to here. Interesting plot and interesting characters to read about. A fantasy world to keep up with. From Review swap.
The story has great potential, and I feel the author's hard work in writing this novel, the writing is fine, sure there's space for improvement like certain repeated words, you may use synonyms for that so on and so forth, overall I enjoyed reading I recommended this mostly to those who enjoy creatures thriller type of novel.