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Marvel:start as Golden superman
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Aadi a full time gamer died in a most unique way in the world after death his soul was present in front of supreme god of Omniverse because God felt very funny for his way of death so she decided she will allow him to live new life in another world
so she will give him lottery for next world, system, newbie gift pack, and soulmate
for world he gets marvel multiverse
for system he gets super god famous scenes sign in system
for newbie gift pack he gets golden superman template 100% but he will not get his strength he will only have his bloodline and abilities and he will have infinite potential means he can reach OAA level with this template he will get golden superman strength after 18 years of sun basking
for soulmate he gets......
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Don't waste your time, the grammar is so bad you basically need to be a codebreaker to read it coherently.
So boring ..................................................................................................................................
Cliche but entertaining plot ideas poorly woven together into a story. As it stands, this story is more a stream of thought than a story. The creativity is there, the writing is not. Each chapter gets a sub-50 score in the free version of Grammarly. Full of run-on-sentences and practically zero punctuation, there are plenty of places for improvement in this authors writing - but it can improve if he tries. Both names and beginnings of sentences need capitalization, sentences need to be broken up into logical segments (Run the paragraph through any number of free pieces of Text-to-speech software to hear it for yourself), and the author needs to start aiming for scores 50+ on Grammarly before posting - with an ultimate goal of eventually reaching 90+. Once that's done, the only issue left is rhythm to which I have no real suggestion to fix besides practice. If this author chooses to continue writing, I pray they make appropriate use of the free tools and advice to improve their work - elsewise the score of this review shall stand testimony aside its kin.
I think you uploaded 3 to 5 charters daily and you should use auto correction future during writing for better grammer
Volume 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1
- 1 chapter 1 reincarnation 1 years ago
- 2 chapter 2 arrival in MARVEL 1 years ago
- 3 chapter 3 system awakening and adoption 1 years ago
- 4 chapter 4 childhood with parker family 1 years ago
- 5 chapter 5 into high school and confession 1 years ago
- 6 Chapter 6 Maya's pov and school trip to Osborn industries(edited) 1 years ago
- 7 Chapter 7 birth of spider man 1 years ago
- 8 New year wish 1 years ago
- 9 Chapter 8 Debut as superman and attention from various forces 1 years ago
- 10 Chapter 9 peter's shock(a short chapter) 1 years ago
- 11 Comment here 1 years ago
- 12 CHAPTER 12 peter's fight and maya knows about Aadi secret 1 years ago
- 13 Chapter 13 Peter fight 10 months ago
- 14 apology 8 months ago
I only got a couple paragraphs in and I had to stop reading because the writing was so bad so to the author please fix your grammar