Synopsis
Anastassia's human life ended on her eighteenth birthday and had become the daughter of the very first vampire ever created. Torn between two worlds, she struggles to become the daughter she's meant to be. But first, there's high school.
You May Also Like
Share your thoughts with others
Write a reviewIt's not easy to rate your own work. ETERNAL is a dream of mine, but I think I can do better. The development of the story needs more improvement as also the writing style. I love the characters I made. Each one represents a friend of mine in reality. The background, in my opinion, is great. I am proud of what I've done. Updates need improvement as well. Hopefully more regular in the future, [img=coins] [img=exp][img=fp]
Epic. I like how all the characters have different personalities. Very curious about their back stories. Can't wait for the update😀😀😀[img=coins][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=recommend][img=update]
Reveal SpoilerIt gives off a tvd vibe that I very much enjoy but still is different and brilliant in its own unique way. The story is interesting and enticing. The characters are very interesting and have relationships that make you curious and hungry for more details and info. The history and background is rich and very alluring.
I like the characters, especially Val and Anastassia. They're very detailed. The plot could use some improvement and the writing style needs more consistency. The world background is interesting and I would love to learn more about the history of BloodStone Island. Overall, I think everything is cool. I enjoy tuning in to it.
Needs to have a proper update sched. The characters are fascinating. I like Zachary BloodStone. I find him most interesting. Dare I say comparable to Klaus—my fav tvd character . The background is kind of mysterious. The story development needs some work and so does the quality of writing. Could use some improvements. Overall, the story has a lot of potential. I recommend it. [img=update][img=coins]