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This series is a diverging path in the life of Azi Montagne and his story in his new world.
Still naive to many things, he will be forced to face reality.
He still yearned for adventure but finds a new purpose as unknown forces take action.
Unbeknownst to all in the world, tragedy will befall, and it will be all in the name of wish. A wish that Azi Montagne holds to see better times and to more importantly, see her again.
“Even now, I wonder if what I am doing is right or wrong, but I have come to not care.”
I WILL SEE IT THROUGH.
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Well, I guess I am first to review. Author you have quite good characters and story. Keep up the work and people soon notice it If you ask for little change that will be uses of (' ') and keep paragraph short. Other then that it's quite good. Hope you don't drop it and also good luck.
The novel is well written and well thought out and the way you give you characters emotion is good as well, your style of writing is good too and I can say it has a lot of potential to grow. But there are a few flaws that I'm seeing, the first is that you use long paragraphs which may make some readers feel it's too long to read and would put off some readers. So I suggest you make the paragraphs smaller, I'm not asking you to make a shorter story but just cut big paragraph in half, like what I'm doing with this review. Next flaw is even though I said before the way you give each character emotions is good you can definitely do it better and I can see you definitely showing improvement in each chapter you write. That's all I have to say about your novel and I think if you have the time you should read this novel.