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IslandFlare
male LV 1Started Writing due to reading and watch too many light novels and anime.
2022-11-14 Joined United StatesBadges 4
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BTW had to revamp the series? If possible please give me a review on the new Traveling Through Tales. Hope you like the grammar edits and restyling.
On accident, the hammer in his hand slipped and fell to the ground a few paces from him. When Azi outstretched his hands to pick up the hammer, the hammer suddenly moved on its own and returned to his hand.
Driven Down Damnation
Fantasy · IslandFlare
In enilion's?
On accident, the hammer in his hand slipped and fell to the ground a few paces from him. When Azi outstretched his hands to pick up the hammer, the hammer suddenly moved on its own and returned to his hand.
Driven Down Damnation
Fantasy · IslandFlare
Love it. Where did you get this picture from? Did someone make it?
ch 212 Machinations
Mushoku Impact
Anime & Comics · Einlion
Any idea when you plan to release more chapters?
ch 2348 Troubles Abound
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Anime & Comics · Einlion
Thank you for the power stones. Your support really helps to motivate me. Take care.
On accident, the hammer in his hand slipped and fell to the ground a few paces from him. When Azi outstretched his hands to pick up the hammer, the hammer suddenly moved on its own and returned to his hand.
Driven Down Damnation
Fantasy · IslandFlare
How have u been? been busy here but hope you are enjoying the weekend.
On accident, the hammer in his hand slipped and fell to the ground a few paces from him. When Azi outstretched his hands to pick up the hammer, the hammer suddenly moved on its own and returned to his hand.
Driven Down Damnation
Fantasy · IslandFlare
probably lol
Azi and Shizu began to stir from their deep slumber. Their eyes were able to open but were still glazed over with sleep. They were both still exhausted from their bout yesterday as it had gone on for a few hours. It was only thanks to Shizu's and Azi's reserve of magical energy that allowed them to recover quickly from battle.
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Fantasy · IslandFlare
The characters are based of a variety of games, but I changed them for the sake of plot and overall story. Multiverse plus this makes it so that MC doesn't have omniscience when it comes to the plot. Btw have you guess the anime, manga, or novel its based on so far?
Chapter 1 Usual Day At The Office
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Fantasy · IslandFlare
Dude keep the feed back coming I'm loving this.[img=recommend]
Chapter 1 Usual Day At The Office
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Fantasy · IslandFlare
Thank you for reading. Hope you enjoy the future chapters. Your feed back is great help and those gif are very fitting. lol. Take care and happy reading. Let me know if you want some recommendations for books.
Chapter 1 Usual Day At The Office
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Fantasy · IslandFlare
I was lost at the beginning as there was no background information, but the intensity of the battle drew me in. The transitioning to the next part of the story was good and the details of magic or power in this world has been thought out. You can add to it via other means and details such as tiers or variations but thats up to you. Overall I liked it, but I would love more elaboration on the characters appearances and thoughts.
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Thanks for your feedback. I keep that in mind for the next chapters. Stay tuned and DM if you want me to review one of your series
ch 0 1 An End.
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Fantasy · Sir_Killington
Its called Traveling Through Tales. Hope you enjoy. Let others know about it since I need all the feedback i can get.
(A/N: Sorry for the super delayed post. I was contracted to do some story work on a mobile game and have been busy the past few weeks. I'll try to release extra chapters in the coming days to make up for it.)
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Anime & Comics · Einlion
I like the story the premise is great but the first few chapters need to be reread for grammar errors and there are times where a better use of word choice is best. Character’s are suddenly introduced and there are quite a few in the first few chapters. Interacts are great and fights are descriptive. But I can’t really visualize them well enough. The world had many things I want to know and would wish they were described in more detail. Possibly describe the village, city, buildings, ground, and air.
World End: The Successor's Contract
Fantasy · Kirito_K5