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Write a reviewGrammar needs some work. It would make reading more easier as you wouldn't be distracted by the grammar and spelling error, and really focus on the story. It can be further improve. Overall, story was good. Keep up with it author.
Hi, Author! I would like to make some corrections regarding the grammar of the story, though I am not a grammarian but I hope this review helps you. Upon reading the first chapter, the things that I want to point out are; The sentences should end with a period rather than a comma. There were a few spelling mistakes that I had noticed. I commented on one of them. The grammar needs improvement, especially the capitalization of the first letter at the start of the sentence. That's all! Despite the minuses, there are plus factors that I noticed such as the world background. Goodluck on your writing journey!
It was a very nice story. I love historical romance novels, and this, with it's arranged marriage troupe, was right up my alley. Prince Eric is a real gentleman, and I hope to see their romance blossom.
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Sweet! Royal drama is one of the best kind of dramas! love the writing style, it's quite elegant💜 keep up the good work author 👍🏼