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Legendary Shelter Survival Guide
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Once upon a time, everything was awesome on planet Earth.
People were chilling with their families, tech was super advanced, and they could even travel way out into space. Animals taking care of the food chain like they always do.
But then, bam! Something crazy happened, and everyone got zapped to this super-dangerous place along with some weird alien folks of many types.
Follow Lucas, a regular dude, as he tries not to get wrecked in this crazy new world.
Some folks got cool skills to survive, but all Lucas got was the power to build a fancy shelter that could level up. Sounds lame, right? But turns out, it might be his ticket to not getting squashed.
So, get ready for Lucas's wild ride as he figures out how to survive in a place that's basically a nightmare. While others are doing ninja moves or casting spells, Lucas is just trying not to get eaten. Little does he know, his so-called bad luck might just be the thing that saves his sorry butt.
Join Lucas in this epic adventure full of surprises, where he builds his shelter, faces crazy challenges, and learns that sometimes, what seems like the worst luck ever can turn out to be a total game-changer.
It's a story of survival, discovery, and how even the simplest guy can rock a world that's turned upside down.
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based on just these seven chapter I can confidently say this book is one of a kind the quality is top notch the story is addictive. The only problem I have is sort of the mc hopefully he learns from some of his mistakes and grows more to become a person who want to live to see his family god job author[img=recommend]
Read what was free for a reference point. Author needs to go back and edit his earlier chapters. I donโt know how you can forget your own characters names. Wish that their was more world building going on even if itโs not know to the MC as the reader it helps with knowing if the story will be to their liking. MC at times seems to have different personalities and switches thought processes. Didnโt really fight a whole lot in the first phase even with all those warning so I was a little disappointed. Was hoping for an attack on the settlement to see the defenses in action. The whole shelter as a skill is kinda unique, wish the story fleshed out a bit more in the free chapters but good luck to the author and hope the update stability doesnโt drop
So interesting story but Iโm going to drop. First, the English and grammar are decent. There are issues here and there but they arenโt too distracting. Story development: this is where the quality drops. Itโs an interesting concept but the logic behind actions do not line up 5 times out of 10. This means that of the 10 actions the mc makes, 5 of said actions are complete forced plot or made up reasoning. Iโll continue this with the character design cause they mix. Character design: ok until the characters show skills they have no right to be able to show. The mc is a supposed city kid with no survival skills. Then he is somehow able to tell different breeds of wolves apart from each other. Then he is able to skin and butcher animals. He literally goes from no survival skills to all the survival skills. This is further exacerbated due to him having no tools/knives to help with his actions. The author obviously doesnโt understand that skinning an animal canโt just be done with your hands. I need at least a sharp knife. World background: ok but ties into the other evaluation. The mc makes constant assumptions that have no actual logical backing to describe his situation. Then the author doesnโt describe some things until they are relevant to the story at hand. This leads to even more unreasonable assumptions and actions that have no tells to why the mc actually did it or what is actually happening.
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Really loving the book so far! Only early days so we don't have a whole lot of general world building, but we do have a lot of localized world building and I love that we're learning along with the MC about what's happening. I'm glad you haven't jumped straight to the MC getting betrayed by everything because that is a really overused plot device and while it works....it's not the best to see it in every other book lol *Spoiler* I am worrying though about how they're going to handle getting every skill to level 5 if they keep getting more new skills and personally I would've immediately attempted to clear the 5 dungeons since they're getting a new skill every-time but is what it is. The could potentially just save the skills papers for after the 4 months? Idk how reliable that would be though. They really do need to focus on farming these skills though, I would be using them every second I could! lol
The concept of the story is pretty good. However, there are many grammar and wording issues in every chapter. There is also a lack of consistency and realism. A character can't be made out to be disgusted and terrified of a dead animal and then be an experienced hunter who is used to breaking such animals down. It also doesn't make sense to be capable of dissecting and breaking down an animal with no tools whatsoever.
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hey u wote a wonderful novel here but I'm wondering if you plan to finish 'I got reincarnated as a kobold.'
So far it's a great story, will reserve the opinion till I read at least 100 chapter
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Hi! My second review here! Now I want everyone to know that it's been a great opportunity to write for you guys. Comments keep coming in, readers keep reacting, things like this makes me motivated to write more. Now as for the content, if you're new here, you might see some inconsistencies in the early chapters. It's not the grammar or spellings, but the characters.Now, I have addressed the situation and done my best in the chapters ahead to tell about the many characters that got introduced.Enough with this rant ๐, hope you will read this novel!And have a great year everyone!