Pragmatico

10d

Replied to aridavid5

In the free chapters MC is not an antihero. I didn’t read further because nothing grab my attention to make me curious enough to pay to read further and that is my personal choice as it was yours to buy a book beforehand. When there are literally thousands of stories on here you need something to grab people’s attention to get them to want to read. It didn’t get my attention due to lack of worldbuilding as well as no information from n how the system will work later in the novel. If it follows every other zombie system then it would get boring and repetitive I would like to know in advance that is all

Pragmatico

29d

Replied to JuicyLu

A little yes but I did eventually drop this one. Story went a direction I personally didn’t care for but to each their own

ch 15 Her Life, Her Experience and Her Hate

Pragmatico

1mth

Replied to Darkxion5455

Me to I think they meant to say is such a win but they put whim as in whimsical

Being Level 19 in such a whim… Now I am only around 17k EXP off getting to Level 20! Maybe I can get the rest by cooking a lot!

Brand New Life Online: Rise Of The Goddess Of Harvest

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

Pragmatico

1mth

Commented

Martial arts not marshelarts is this a a wild west story

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Pragmatico

1mth

Commented

When did he gain shapeshifting

"Found one!" Ben claimed that before he used shapeshifting to shrink his size to that of a normal mosquito, he flew in a certain direction faster than any human eye could track.

Pragmatico

1mth

Commented

I notice you repeat paragraphs at times let’s not do this to increase word count in a chapter it’s cheap and lazy

The constant blood needles hit their mark, one by one, until finally a last attack served through the beetle's neck, ending its life for good.

Pragmatico

1mth

Replied to victoralr

I can’t give your story a proper review since I could not read past chapter 2. Please fix the grammar so I can try again.

Pragmatico

1mth

Commented

Since this story is over a year old and the grammar is still not fixed I will pass on reading this one. If you care about your story edit your work and make it best you can. Almost every sentence is messed up. Going from his/him to her or their. Changing perspectives mid paragraph. Random grammatical errors everywhere

ch 0 1 Chapter 1

Pragmatico

1mth

Commented

Play all day to get my moneys worth

Still, I should play all day in able to make my money's worth.

Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!

Fantasy · Master_OfDao

Pragmatico

1mth

Commented

Why do you keep saying hard work money. Hard earned money would sound more natural to English speakers.

Today is his birthday, February 20, 2025. Since he just turned 25 today Leo hopes to enjoy himself slightly by spending all his hard work money.

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Fantasy · Master_OfDao

Pragmatico

2mth

Commented

Hope frequency of updates improves soon

ch 1025 Chapter 1025 Returning Home with a New Companion

Pragmatico

2mth

Replied to Alexcj

It’s on my to read list I like to binge watch/ read so I’ll keep an eye out to see when I should start reading

Pragmatico

2mth

Replied to Alexcj

When it hits 50 chapters I’ll read it thanks

Pragmatico

2mth

Replied to Alexcj

Not eating someone that is alive and making a zombie he has not at least not in the free chapters

Pragmatico

4mth

Commented

Got any of them new chapters for me

ch 943 942. Unexpected Message

Pragmatico

4mth

Posted

Read what was free for a reference point: writing quality is good as far as grammar goes. Can use some editing to fix small mistakes and clarify things better. At times the same thing is repeated over and over adding no new details to further the story just the word count. World building is going slow but progressing but at the same time a lot of details are skipped or glossed over in my opinion. The main character has no developments yet as far as getting attached or invested in his adventure for answers. Wish he would have eaten someone by now or at least used his new skill. New story so it’s hard to speak about update stability but there isn’t over 50 chapters yet. Wish the writer luck with their story

Pragmatico

4mth

Replied to GilgameshTheFirst

When it hits 50 chapters I will but looks like you bounce from one idea to the next and don’t stick with it pick one story and complete it no matter if it is a hit or not just be passionate about your story

Apocalypse - Zombie Evolution System

Sci-fi · AllenWorker

Pragmatico

4mth

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Some of them he didn’t even

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Pragmatico

4mth

Commented

You pretty much repeated the sentence about the smell liking someone from lack of oxygen. Just increases word count without adding to the story in any way

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Pragmatico

4mth

Commented

Don’t need to say trapped after saying trapping them with shields

The battle progress in utter chaos, every orc for himself, no formation at all while their enemies confront them in groups, trapping them with their shields and stabbing them with spears or swords while they trapped them.

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