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I, Jason Rodriguez 19 year's old was a regular truck driver. My life was already content with taking care of my parents laughing and enjoying the days of their last.
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To take care of my parents health, I had to drop out from the college and work as a construction site truck driver.
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At my last moment of life, I was driving back to park the truck at the company.
When suddenly a kid came in the middle of the road.
I used the steering wheel to make a sharp right turn, what I didn't expect another truck ram into me.
Then I reincarnated, I regained my memories at the age of 7 with the help of system.
My name is Shirou Emiya?
And what is Mana and Od?
A/N: I don't own the series, characters or any events. This is a fanfiction with crossover.
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Ja gandu, mere tarf seh 5 stars... ~ Grammar, Story, Jo bhi hoo... Bush harem na bana dio... - Agr story harem(more tn 7) nikli toh, sare stars bapas... Seh leh lunga
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No quiero ser muy duro, pero es lo que hay. La escritura es muy mala, tanto por los emojis, y la forma en que se escriban algunas cosas con guiones bajos y demás. Los diálogos algunos están bien, pero otros parecen muy mecánicos. Además, siendo realistas, por que alguien dejaría que un pajaro lo picotee? El autor no lo ha experimentado? O tal vez el MC es masoquista... En fin, no puedo decir mucho sobre la trama aún, pero no es una lectura agradable
Fate grand order please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!