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The Magus

Fantasy 16 Chapters 40.8K Views
Author: elbas

4.92 (10 ratings)

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This book concludes its updates here. If you desire to delve further into the story, you may continue your reading journey in its newly christened title, "The Magus: Echoes of the Forgotten."
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Balvan

It's dark right from the get go and I like it, I want more of this stuff, I mean it's been a while where a novel got me hooked up from the beginning. And pleaaase do not mess up halfway in to the story😭😭, I have seen some novels who started up good and then got wasted in the middle.

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Kekei
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Ooh nice beginning with this type of beginning i am expecting a lot it's been a long time since i read something interesting right from the get go

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Comando

So far so good, only if you endure the first five or six chapters will you get to the good part, i'm telling you this novel will blow up soon.

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Kekei
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I don't know why you all are ranting about the grammar and whatnot but the author clearly stated english is not his first language, just chill people.

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elbas
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Thank you all for the great reviews and criticism you have given to this novel!! I will continuously improve my writing, so please bear with me through this journey.

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Truth_seekers

I got recommended this book by a friend, it's good and promising but that's it, it's still too little to judge but i am only rating this because author-nim is humble and please work on the grammer.

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elbas
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Since most authors vote 5 stars for their novel, I shall follow their example and do the same. -Finally found a perfect excuse to rate my story 5 stars. Jokes aside I would appreciate leaving behind constructive criticism regarding my novel. like my Grammer, the structure and so on...

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queenmero

It looks so promising so I am just gonna add it in one of my long list of novels[img=update][img=recommend] Hope it doesn't dissapoint me this novel is just what I needed right now let's goooo

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Balvan

Man the Grammer is killing the mood, it was amazing especially the 2 chapter but after that it's getting a little too bright and let's not talk about the walls of text, fix that.

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ZenMaverick

i think this novel has a possibility to be one of the greatest novels

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