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Crescent Veil : Chronicles of Intrigue
Fantasy · 1001001sh
for the first chapter it was good
ch 0 1 Prologue : The Veil of Destiny
Crescent Veil : Chronicles of Intrigue
Fantasy · 1001001sh
i gotta say it was impressive word choice you got there
Little do they know that their interwined paths will shake the foundations of the world, awakening dormant powers and heralding a new era. In a realm where gods are worshipped and mortal tremble, Lucias and Nathan stand poised to weave their own legends, destined to shape the tapestry of their interwind fates. The prologue begins, and the stage is set for a tale of grandeur, mystery, and the clash of worlds.
Crescent Veil : Chronicles of Intrigue
Fantasy · 1001001sh
wow
In the land of shadow and secrets, where the veil between realms is thin, a tale begins. It is a story woven in the threads of destiny, where the fates of mortals and the whims of gods entwine. Amidst the enigmatic dance of lights and darkness, a young soul awakens to a world of mysteries.
Crescent Veil : Chronicles of Intrigue
Fantasy · 1001001sh
My thoughts:- you explained what the characters are way to soon although you leave the important things hidden it is just that early character reveal is a big thing make sure you don't do it for the next
ch 0 -1 Character Detailed (Base)
Crescent Veil : Chronicles of Intrigue
Fantasy · 1001001sh
good start well balanced and detailed
ch 0 1 Chapter 01: Death
The Inheritance Of The Supreme Immortals
Fantasy · Sam_OverPowered
maybe
"Kill me?" Sam frowned. "You, Julian? The guy who's scared shitless to even go to the principal's office wants to kill me? Did you hit your head or something?"
The Inheritance Of The Supreme Immortals
Fantasy · Sam_OverPowered
cause you killed his people man
"Revenge for what, exactly?" As far as Sam could recall, he hadn't done anything to provoke this guy's anger, other than inadvertently making him extremely jealous.
The Inheritance Of The Supreme Immortals
Fantasy · Sam_OverPowered
since when a car starts to hum
As he ventured deeper into the shadowy alley, his senses perked up to an unusual hush that enveloped the surroundings. The only discernible sounds were the distant hum of passing vehicles.
The Inheritance Of The Supreme Immortals
Fantasy · Sam_OverPowered
nope
The city where this teenager resided bore a remarkable resemblance to New York, and you're well aware of how quirky and frenetic New York nights can become, aren't you?
The Inheritance Of The Supreme Immortals
Fantasy · Sam_OverPowered
picture
"Veil of Shadows," Kael muttered to himself, his fingers flying across the keyboard as he typed in the search terms. "Ancient dimensions... supernatural realms... encounters with mysterious figures..."
Nightshade of Unveiled
Urban · ZenMaverick
Oh, she is still getting the execution huh
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Summoned by a Pretend Villainess
Fantasy · superAyan
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Summoned by a Pretend Villainess
Fantasy · superAyan
pretty boy detected
The man, whose hair is as golden as the sun and eyes as blue as the sky, with a face filled with beauty, and elegance that carries an innate magnificence befitting of a true royal, smiled gently to his guests.
Summoned by a Pretend Villainess
Fantasy · superAyan
bro how many words are in there it felt like 5k or more
ch 0 2 Chapter 1: Unveiled Omens, The Arrival
Crescent Veil : Chronicles of Intrigue
Fantasy · 1001001sh